You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. v.3
You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. v. 3
Dear Sir or Madam,
Recently I went to your office to inquire about your air conditioner repair services that you offer at residential homes. But your staff members were not professional at all, to say the least.
One of my Air Conditioners had not been functioning properly for the last couple of days. So, it was an emergency situation for me to get my AC fixed as soon as possible to survive in this terribly hot weather. But, when I visited your office last week, I was kept waiting for a long time just to talk to someone. On top of that, when I was finally able to talk to one of your experts, he didn’t seem to be too interested in listening to my problems. To tell you the truth, I didn’t expect such disturbing behaviour from a company like yours, especially, when I drove about 45 minutes to arrive at your office.
Anyway, I didn’t lodge a complaint, but I felt offended by such behaviour. Therefore, I would highly appreciate if you get all of your AC repair experts to value all of your visiting customers and solve their problems like true professionals.
Yours faithfully,
Rabid Menon
Dear Sir or Madam,
Recently I went to your office to inquire about your air conditioner repair services that you offer at residential homes.  
But
 your staff members were not professional at all, to say the least.
One of my Air Conditioners had not been functioning  
properly
 for the last couple of days.  
So
, it was an emergency situation for me to  
get
 my AC  
fixed
 as  
soon
 as possible to survive in this  
terribly
 hot weather.  
But
, when I visited your office last week, I was  
kept
 waiting for a long time  
just
 to talk to someone.  
On top of that
, when I was  
finally
 able to talk to one of your experts, he didn’t seem to be too interested in listening to my problems. To  
tell
 you the truth, I didn’t  
expect
 such disturbing  
behaviour
 from a  
company
 like yours,  
especially
, when I drove about 45 minutes to arrive at your office.
Anyway, I didn’t lodge a complaint,  
but
 I felt offended by such  
behaviour
.  
Therefore
, I would  
highly
 appreciate if you  
get
 all of your AC repair experts to value all of your visiting customers and solve their problems like true professionals.
Yours  
faithfully
,
Rabid  
Menon
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes