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Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged In your letter you should tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it v.2

Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged In your letter you should tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw you attention on the pathetic condition of street in front of my resident I am resident of phase 1 Mohali, Punjab, India. My name is Maninder Kaur Vadhrah. It is the very posh and good locality of our beautiful city. I purchased this house only because of the surrounding and infrastructure of the area. Actually the trouble started last year when the construction of apartments started in back side of the residential area. Builder si constructing the huge residential apartments around 200 in that area. All the heavy vehicle, which are carrying the construction material are passing through our lane, because of the traffic congestion in the highway. Due to this the road is in extremely pathetic situation and urgently require the re construction Earlier builder promised that he will get the road repaired after the completion of his project, but six months passed and nothing has been done so far. I request you to kindly get the road build again as it is causing huge inconvenience to the local residents or file the complaint against the builder. Hope to get the solution soon. Yours faithfully, Maninder kaur Vadhrah
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw you attention on the pathetic condition of street in front of my resident

I am resident of phase 1
Mohali
, Punjab, India. My name is
Maninder
Kaur
Vadhrah
. It is the
very
posh and
good
locality of our
beautiful
city. I
purchased
this
house
only
because
of the surrounding and infrastructure of the area.

Actually the trouble
started
last year when the construction of apartments
started
in back side of the residential area. Builder
si
constructing the huge residential apartments around 200 in that area. All the heavy vehicle, which are carrying the construction material are passing through our lane,
because
of the traffic congestion in the highway. Due to this the road is in
extremely
pathetic situation and
urgently
require the re
construction


Earlier builder promised that he will
get
the road repaired after the completion of his project,
but
six months passed and nothing has
been done
so
far. I request you to kindly
get
the road build again as it is causing huge inconvenience to the local residents or file the complaint against the builder.

Hope to
get
the solution
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Maninder
kaur
Vadhrah
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged In your letter you should tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it v. 2

Letter
8 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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