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You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. v. 4

Dear Valentina, Thank you for agreeing to house-sit for me the whole week while I will be away in Bali, Indonesia. If you need to contact me during this time, I’ll be staying at the Liberty Dive Resort. If it’s urgent, however, please ring my mobile phone, which I’ll keep with me at all times. My cat, Tommy, needs to be fed twice daily so each morning and evening put a handful of his food in his dish. I have reserved enough food for him and you can find it in the kitchen cabinet marked as Tommy. Also, please check throughout the day to make sure he has fresh water. You can give him a small bowl of milk in the evening. Finally, let him play outside in the evening but make sure he gets back before the dark settles in. I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor ones in the lounge only need water once every few days but the plants on the balcony need to be watered daily unless there has been heavy rain. Finally, for security, please clear my mailbox every day and keep the outside lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Yours, Isabella

IELTS letter You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. v.4

Dear Valentina, Thank you for agreeing to
house
-sit for me the whole week while I will be away in Bali, Indonesia. If you need to contact me during this time, I’ll be staying at the Liberty Dive Resort. If it’s urgent,
however
,
please
ring my mobile phone, which I’ll
keep
with me at all times. My cat, Tommy, needs to
be fed
twice daily
so
each morning and evening put a handful of his food in his dish. I have reserved
enough
food for him and you can find it in the kitchen cabinet marked as Tommy.
Also
,
please
check
throughout the day to
make
sure he has fresh water. You can give him a
small
bowl of milk in the evening.
Finally
,
let
him play outside in the evening
but
make
sure he
gets
back
before
the dark settles in. I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor ones in the lounge
only
need water once every few days
but
the plants on the balcony need to
be watered
daily unless there has been heavy rain.
Finally
, for security,
please
clear
my mailbox every day and
keep
the outside lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Yours, Isabella
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
7 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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