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Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age In your letter you should tell what facilities you want why you want them what suggestions you can give v.2

Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age In your letter you should tell what facilities you want why you want them what suggestions you can give v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the sport facilities which is lacking in our city. Recently I have shifted to this wonderful city with my family, but to surprise I came to know that there is not big stadium available in the city, which provide the variety of sporting facilities under single roof. I think development of stadium is vital for the proper development of the people living here. I am national level hockey player and working in public sector under sports quota and most of the time I keeps on travelling. But when I will be at home it will be difficult for me to practice. So if a stadium is opened, me along with other youngsters can ripe the benefit and may make the country pride at international level. There is a lot of vacant space available in the outskirt of the city which can be utilized for the construction of stadium can I am sure it will change the life of many people and they gain the name at national and international live and make the city famous. Apart from this, because of these people can also stay fit and healthy. Hope you will consider my request. Yours faithfully, Maninder Vadhrah
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the sport facilities which is lacking in our city.

Recently I have shifted to this wonderful city with my family,
but
to surprise I came to know that there is not
big
stadium
available in the city, which provide the variety of sporting facilities under single roof. I
think
development of
stadium
is vital for the proper development of the
people
living here.

I am national level hockey player and working in public sector under sports quota and most of the time I
keeps
on travelling.
But
when I will be at home it will be difficult for me to practice.
So
if a
stadium
is opened
, me along with other youngsters can ripe the benefit and may
make
the country pride at international level.

There is
a lot of
vacant space available in the outskirt of the city which can
be utilized
for the construction of
stadium
can I am sure it will
change
the life of
many
people and
they gain the name at national and international
live
and
make
the city
famous
. Apart from this,
because
of these
people
can
also
stay fit and healthy.

Hope you will consider my request.

Yours
faithfully
,

Maninder
Vadhrah
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IELTS letter Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age In your letter you should tell what facilities you want why you want them what suggestions you can give v. 2

Letter
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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