Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to thank you for the opportunity to be a part of your organisation. I was offered the Junior Executive position in your organisation and was supposed to start my office on 2nd August 2019. However, a problem has arisen and it forces me to delay my joining for a month than initially planned.
As you know, I currently work for my father's gift shop, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience from my involvement in this business. Unfortunately, my father has been admitted to a hospital for his illness, leaving me in charge of both the home and the business. As this is a particularly busy time for the shop, I am forced to take charge of running the shop.
I can understand that it would be inconvenient for you but I am hoping that you would consider the circumstances and allow me to take up my position with your company one month later than the date we initially agreed upon.
I would like to emphasise that I remain very keen to work for your company and would be ready to join from 1st September 2019.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Brian Hall
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to thank you for the opportunity to be a part of your
organisation
. I
was offered
the Junior Executive position in your
organisation
and
was supposed
to
start
my office on 2nd August 2019.
However
, a problem has arisen and it forces me to delay my joining for a month than
initially
planned.
As you know, I
currently
work for my father's gift shop, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience from my involvement in this business. Unfortunately, my father has
been admitted
to a hospital for his illness, leaving me in charge of both the home and the business. As this is a
particularly
busy time for the shop, I
am forced
to take charge of running the shop.
I can understand that it would be inconvenient for you
but
I am hoping that you would consider the circumstances and
allow
me to take up my position with your
company
one month later than the date we
initially
agreed
upon.
I would like to
emphasise
that I remain
very
keen to work for your
company
and would be ready to
join
from 1st September 2019.
I
look forward to hearing from you.
Yours
faithfully
,
Brian Hall
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