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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v.2

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know how pleased I and my friends are after celebrating my friend’s 27th birthdays at your restaurant. By the way, we were planning to celebrate my friend’s birthday at another place, but we had to change our plan at the eleventh hour for some reasons. But, after coming to your restaurant and seeing how you have flawlessly planned for the birthday, I am so glad that we actually went to your place. Anyway, the seating arrangement for so many guests was just perfect. The foods and desserts were just outstanding as they tasted like they were so fresh and right out of the oven. In fact, I would never forget the chewy taste of those mushrooms which were cooked with Italian pasta. And, as for the services, all of your staff members were utmost courteous and professional, and some of them even went out of their ways to write few poetry lines to cheer up our birthday boy. So, all in all, we all had a great time at your restaurant, and we sure would like to come back again in future. Yours faithfully, Jimmy Falcon
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know how
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pleased
I and my friends are after celebrating my friend’s 27th birthdays at your restaurant. By the way, we were planning to celebrate my friend’s birthday at another place,
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but
we had to
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change
our plan at the eleventh hour for
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some
reasons.
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But
, after coming to your restaurant and seeing how you have
flawlessly
planned for the birthday, I am
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so
glad that we actually went to your place.

Anyway, the seating arrangement for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
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many
guests was
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just
perfect. The foods and desserts were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
outstanding as they tasted like they were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
fresh and right out of the oven. In fact, I would never forget the chewy taste of those mushrooms which
were cooked
with Italian pasta. And, as for the services, all of your staff members were utmost courteous and professional, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them even went out of their ways to write few poetry lines to cheer up our birthday boy.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, all in all, we all had a great time at your restaurant, and we sure would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back again
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jimmy Falcon
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
197 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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