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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v.1

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my satisfaction and admiration regarding the outstanding food and service we have enjoyed in your restaurant, “La-Italiano”, last Sunday. Thank you for making our event more special. It was one of my friend's birthday so we decided to celebrate it at your restaurant. We visited your restaurant on 29th July, at around 7. 30 pm, due to its convenient location and a good reputation for delicious food. I am glad that we picked your place. Five of us went to your eatery and we enjoyed a traditional Italian cousin for dinner and a special black forest cake from your restaurant. It really did worth the money we paid because I suppose you have hired the best chef in the town! The service of the waiters was also marvellous. They were truly well-mannered, organised and skilled in serving food. On top of that, the interior design of your place is adequately stunning. We also realised how preciously you treat your customers when my friend got a chocolate box as a birthday gift on behalf of your restaurant. That truly made our day. I hope the authorities of your restaurant will always ensure this excellent service and food to all its guests. Yours faithfully, Shadia Rahman
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my satisfaction and admiration regarding the outstanding
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food
and service we have enjoyed in your
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restaurant
, “
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La-Italiano
”, last Sunday. Thank you for making our
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event
more special.

It was one of my friend's birthday
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so
we decided to celebrate it at your
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restaurant
. We visited your
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restaurant
on 29th July, at around 7. 30 pm, due to its convenient location and a
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good
reputation for delicious
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food
. I am glad that we picked your place.

Five of us went to your
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eatery and
we enjoyed a traditional Italian cousin for dinner and a special black forest cake from your
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restaurant
. It
really
did
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worth
the money we paid
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because
I suppose you have hired the best chef in the town! The service of the waiters was
also
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marvellous
. They were
truly
well-mannered,
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organised
and skilled in serving
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food
.
On top of that
, the interior design of your place is
adequately
stunning.

We
also
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realised
how
preciously
you treat your customers when my friend
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got
a chocolate box as a birthday gift on behalf of your
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restaurant
. That
truly
made our day.

I hope the authorities of your
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restaurant
will always ensure this excellent service and
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food
to all its guests.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Shadia
Rahman
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
212 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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