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Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reason for the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take v.2

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reason for the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take v. 2
Dear Mr and Mrs Williams, I am writing in regards to the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and problem caused due to my actions and I assure you that I will be more careful in the future about it. I started learning the piano recently. As you may know, I work full-time and the only free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends. I have hired a piano teacher to teach me during the weekends and I am sorry that the noise reached your flat. I am sorry about the inconvenience I caused to you and Mrs Williamds. I did not expect the sound of my piano to be so loud and reach your rooms. I totally understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies. As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my piano classes at my tutor' s house instead of mine. This way I would be able to continue my practice and not disrupt you. I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship. Yours sincerely, Alfred Harris
Dear Mr and Mrs Williams,

I am writing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and problem caused due to my actions and I assure you that I will be more careful in the future about it.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
learning the
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piano
recently. As you may know, I work full-time and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends. I have hired a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
piano
teacher to teach me during the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
weekends and
I am sorry that the noise reached your flat.

I am sorry about the inconvenience I caused to you and Mrs
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Williamds
.
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I
did not
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expect
the sound of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
piano
to be
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so
loud and reach your rooms.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
totally
understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies.

As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
piano
classes at my
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tutor&
#039; s
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house
instead
of mine. This way I would be able to continue my practice and not disrupt you.

I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship.

Yours
sincerely
,

Alfred Harris
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reason for the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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