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Write a letter to your manger to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter– Who is this person? – Why did you choose him/her? – What are the characteristics of a good employee? v.2

Write a letter to your manger to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter– Who is this person? – Why did you choose him/her? – What are the characteristics of a good employee? v. 2
Dear John, I am writing this letter to nominate a candidate for the best employee of the year award. I would like to nominate Priyanka from Development team, on behalf of my entire team for this award. Firstly, by keeping her overall year' s performance in mind, she truly deserves to get this award as she has worked really hard to finish the project before deadline. Moreover, her potential to handle work pressure and always come up with accurate resolution is remarkable. In addition, she has helped many junior employees to overcome their difficulties and did a smooth knowledge transfer to enhance their skills. Therefore, I believe that she is a right person for this award. However, in my opinion, there are many characteristics which contributes to make a good employee. For instance, justifying the role and position, good learning capabilities, zeal to work as a good team member, right use of skills and experience, Help Company to grow and being respectful to the company' s policies and workplace are some traits which help a person to become an asset for the company. I have seen all these qualities in Priyanka, hence, my nomination goes for her. If you need any further details regarding this please let me know. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sonali
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to nominate a candidate for the best employee of the year award.

I would like to nominate Priyanka from Development team, on behalf of my entire team for this award.
Firstly
, by keeping her
overall
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year&
#039; s performance in mind, she
truly
deserves to
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get
this award as she has worked
really
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hard
to finish the project
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before
deadline.
Moreover
, her potential to handle work pressure and always
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come
up with accurate resolution is remarkable.
In addition
, she has
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helped
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many
junior employees to overcome their difficulties and did a smooth knowledge transfer to enhance their
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skills
.
Therefore
, I believe that she is a right person for this award.

However
, in my opinion, there are
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many
characteristics which contributes to
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make
a
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good
employee.
For instance
, justifying the role and position,
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good
learning capabilities, zeal to work as a
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good
team member, right
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use
of
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skills
and experience,
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Help
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Company
to grow and being respectful to the
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company&
#039; s policies and workplace are
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some
traits which
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help
a person to become an asset for the
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company
. I have
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seen
all these qualities in Priyanka,
hence
, my nomination goes for her.

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If
you need any
further
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details
regarding this
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please
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let
me know.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sonali
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your manger to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter– Who is this person? – Why did you choose him/her? – What are the characteristics of a good employee? v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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