Dear Neha,
How are you? I hope you are healthy and happy. What about the result of your M. B. A course? I am glad to tell you that I have got a distinction in my M. Sc. course and would like you to be present at a party I am throwing to commemorate the event on 25th August.
I am planning for a small party at my home this coming Sunday, 25th August. I would like to invite you to the party and I really want to see you on that day. I have invited all our childhood friends, hence it would be a get-together party for all of us. This party will definitely be a good reason to meet.
Last year I moved into a new apartment which is in Satellite area of the city and I hope you have my address. It is very easy to find my residence. First, you should reach the Satellite area, main road and towards the left of the entrance, you will find a shopping mall called KH 24; from there you should come straight away and you will find my apartment. I have sent you my coordinates at Google Maps in your email.
However, if you have any difficulty in finding my address, just call me. I will send my cousin for your help. See you at the party then.
Best wishes,
Rahul
Dear
Neha
,
How are you? I hope you are healthy and happy. What about the result of your M. B. A course? I am glad to
tell
you that I have
got
a distinction in my
M. Sc.
course and would like you to be present at a
party
I am throwing to commemorate the
event
on 25th August.
I am planning for a
small
party
at my home this coming
Sunday, 25th August
.
I
would like to invite you to the
party
and I
really
want to
see
you on that day.
I
have invited all our childhood friends,
hence
it would be a
get
-together
party
for all of us. This
party
will definitely be a
good
reason to
meet
.
Last year I
moved
into a new apartment which is in Satellite area of the city and I hope you have my address. It is
very
easy to find my residence.
First
, you should reach the Satellite area, main road and towards the
left
of the entrance, you will find a shopping mall called
KH
24; from there you should
come
straight away and you will find my apartment. I have
sent
you my coordinates at Google Maps in your email.
However
, if you have any difficulty in finding my address,
just
call me. I will
send
my cousin for your
help
.
See
you at the
party
then.
Best wishes,
Rahul
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6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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