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Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you are familiar with 1 Describe to him the place orth visiting 2 Eating Options 3 Transport Options v.2

Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you are familiar with 1 Describe to him the place orth visiting 2 Eating Options 3 Transport Options v. 2
Hi John, Hope you are doing good. I am happy to hear that you along with your friends have planned to visit the historic city, Surat next month. Surat is a beautiful city. Since I have stayed there for six months during my first job, I ll suggest you some of the wonderful places to explore. Make sure you visit the science museum, the lake garden, statue of unity and the club Utopia, which is constructed on ancient India theme. Moreover, there are a number of beautiful shopping mall where u can visit vivid designer stores and famous local brands. As you are going during winters to visit this historic city, try the authentic Gujarati food that serves special food items. Apart from this, you ought to try the mouth watering breakfast that is served in the early morning at the city center near railway station. Exploring the city is best when traveled via private cab. Apart from this, you can also take the local bus and BRTS (bus rapid transport system) system which travels to every corner of the city. Furthermore, recently the city council has developed a special cycling route where you can rent a bicycle that has a map and shows you the desired route to travel five famous tourists places. Hope you will have a blast with your friends while exploring Surat. If you want any other information, let me know. I ll be happy to assist you. Best Regards Ram
Hi John,

Hope you are doing
good
. I am happy to hear that you along with your friends have planned to
visit
the historic city, Surat
next
month.

Surat is a
beautiful
city. Since I have stayed there for six months during my
first
job,
I ll
suggest you
some of the
wonderful places to explore.
Make
sure you
visit
the science museum, the lake garden, statue of unity and the club Utopia, which
is constructed
on ancient India theme.
Moreover
, there are a number of
beautiful
shopping mall where u can
visit
vivid designer stores and
famous
local brands.

As you are going during winters to
visit
this historic city, try the authentic Gujarati food that serves special food items. Apart from this, you ought to try the mouth watering breakfast that
is served
in the early morning at the city center near railway station.

Exploring the city is best when traveled via private cab. Apart from this, you can
also
take the local bus and
BRTS
(bus rapid transport system) system which travels to every corner of the city.
Furthermore
, recently the city council has developed a special cycling route where you can rent a bicycle that has a map and
shows
you the desired route to travel five
famous
tourists places.

Hope you will have a blast with your friends while exploring Surat.

If you want any other information,
let
me know.
I ll
be happy to assist you.

Best Regards

Ram
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you are familiar with 1 Describe to him the place orth visiting 2 Eating Options 3 Transport Options v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
244 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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