Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter including: What you bought? What the problem is? Why you want a refund? v.2
Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter including: What you bought? What the problem is? Why you want a refund? v. 2
To the management of the Djicala,
I am a regular patron of your online shopping website and am writing to you regarding the impaired product which I received for the third time last week. Allow me to elaborate on my situation.
Last week, I bought a learning French DVDs from your company. As usual, I received this by your regular post. However, when I opened it, I realized that there is a crack on that. I spoke to one of your supportive staff then they changed it after two days. But, unfortunately, when I came to use it, I noticed they sent me the wrong one in this time. I rang again and explained that this is an intermediate level while I requested an advanced one. Finally, they resent me other DVDs which were not French courses. This, as I am sure you can understand, is intolerable.
Thus, I expect immediate refund as I do not need those DVDs anymore. Also, I anticipate you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.
To the management of the
Djicala
,
I am a regular patron of your online shopping website and
am
writing to you regarding the impaired product which I received for the third time last week.
Allow
me to elaborate on my situation.
Last week, I
bought
a learning French DVDs from your
company
. As usual, I received this by your regular post.
However
, when I opened it, I realized that there is a crack on that. I spoke to one of your supportive staff then they
changed
it after two days.
But
, unfortunately, when I came to
use
it, I noticed they
sent
me the
wrong
one in this time. I rang again and
explained
that this is an intermediate level while I requested an advanced one.
Finally
, they resent me other DVDs which were not French courses. This, as I am sure you can understand, is intolerable.
Thus
, I
expect
immediate refund as I do not need those DVDs anymore.
Also
, I anticipate you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela