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Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. v.1

Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. v. 1
I am writing this letter to inform you that I won' t be able to attend the scheduled interview for Java course in college campus. I would like to apologize being late on interview. Let me explain the reason of being late. I had an appointment with doctor for eye check-up of my mother. I had to stay with her for several requirements. She has to go for operation next day. I have to be there for completing certain formality before the operation date. Nobody was present to take care of entire situation except me. That' s the reason I could not appear for interview on time. It would be better if you allow me to appear for interview day after tomorrow or later the same day, then it would be helpful for me to take care of the whole situation. Please let me know the approx time duration of entire interview session. Along with that, confirm that is there any test during any stage of interview? Thank you for your consideration in advance.
I am writing this letter to inform you that I
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won&
#039; t be able to attend the scheduled
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interview
for Java course in college campus. I would like to apologize being late on interview.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the reason of being late. I had an appointment with doctor for eye
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check
-up of my mother. I had to stay with her for several requirements. She
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
go for operation
next
day. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be there for completing certain formality
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the operation date. Nobody was present to take care of entire situation except me.
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That&
#039; s the reason I could not appear for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
on time.

It would be better if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to appear for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
day after tomorrow or later the same day, then it would be helpful for me to take care of the whole situation.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know the approx time duration of entire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
session. Along with that, confirm
that is
there any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
during any stage of interview?

Thank you for your consideration in advance.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. v. 1

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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