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You have been working for a company for more than a few years, and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. v.3

You have been working for a company for more than a few years, and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. v. 3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to formally notify you that I have decided to resign from my position effective from the 1st of March. I would like to express my gratitude for the wonderful five years that I have spent working with you at Jones Incorporation. Working as a sales supervisor for almost half a decade in your esteemed organisation was one of the best opportunities in my life. I have gained valuable experience in dealing with customers and promoting products which I believe will help me further advance my career. Moreover, the coworkers, seniors and the management had been like a family to me. I enjoyed working for this company to a great extent. I have recently accepted an offer at a managerial position in Dunken's Brothers Company. I am expected to join there at the beginning of March. Hence, I would like you to discharge me from my responsibilities before 1st August 2020. In the meantime, I will hand over my assigned tasks and finish my works. I will always remember the excellent time that I have spent working for you. I wish eternal progress and success for the company and the team. Yours faithfully, Rien Taylor
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
formally
notify you that I have decided to resign from my position effective from the 1st of March. I would like to express my gratitude for the wonderful five years that I have spent working with you at Jones Incorporation.

Working as a sales supervisor for almost half a decade in your esteemed
organisation
was one of the best opportunities in my life. I have gained valuable experience in dealing with customers and promoting products which I believe will
help
me
further
advance my career.
Moreover
, the coworkers, seniors and the management had been like a family to me. I enjoyed working for this
company
to a great extent.

I have recently
accepted
an offer at a managerial position in
Dunken
's Brothers
Company
.
I
am
expected
to
join
there at the beginning of March.
Hence
, I would like you to discharge me from my responsibilities
before
1st August 2020. In the meantime, I will hand over my assigned tasks and finish my works.

I will always remember the excellent time that I have spent working for you. I wish eternal progress and success for the
company
and the team.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rien
Taylor
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have been working for a company for more than a few years, and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. v. 3

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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