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You have been working for a company for more than a few years, and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. v.2

You have been working for a company for more than a few years, and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you of my decision to leave Pedagogy Technologies effective from 2nd of December 2020. I would always be grateful for the opportunities you have given me. I am hoping you would complete the official procedure to discharge me from my responsibilities before the mentioned date. During my tenure of four years, I have enjoyed my work and have learned a great deal. When I joined the company, I was a fresher and did not know much about corporate life. But having spent 4 years with Pedagogy Technologies, I am not only well versed with the technical aspect of Campaign Management but also mastered the methodologies and techniques used in this sector. I am glad to be a part of campaign management and planning. I particularly enjoyed interacting with clients and cherished the success of the team. I have made some good friends and will miss them horribly. Sadly, all good things come to an end, and now I think it is time for me to take a step forward. I have decided to pursue my MBA qualification in marketing and have been selected in one of the UK's best universities. I would like to thank you for providing me with your support and guidance during my tenure with the company. Yours faithfully, Preeti Ghuraiya
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you of my decision to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
Pedagogy Technologies effective from 2nd of December 2020. I would always be grateful for the opportunities you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am hoping you would complete the official procedure to discharge me from my responsibilities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the mentioned date.

During my tenure of four years, I have enjoyed my work and have learned a great deal. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, I was a fresher and did not know much about corporate life.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
having spent 4 years with Pedagogy Technologies, I am not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
well versed with the technical aspect of Campaign Management
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
mastered the methodologies and techniques
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in this sector.

I am glad to be a part of campaign management and planning. I
particularly
enjoyed interacting with clients and cherished the success of the team.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
friends and will miss them
horribly
.

Sadly
, all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
things
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it is time for me to take a step forward. I have decided to pursue my MBA qualification in marketing and have
been selected
in one of the UK's best universities.

I would like to thank you for providing me with your support and guidance during my tenure with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Preeti
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Ghuraiya
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have been working for a company for more than a few years, and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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