Dear Sir,
I have been joined a Computer application course in PHP two months ago in your institute. It was going really well in the beginning but after eight weeks, I realized it is not going as mentioned of the brochure. In admission brochure there was mentioned 6 steps which are related to PHP technology ie: Introduction, Implementation of PHP, Uses of conditions, If else fundamentals, benefits of PHP and Project. In my class tutors are not serious and also they taught us lessons which are out of the scope. I have mentioned them these topics are not useful for us but they denied and told me we are teaching these topics from last 2 years. I have gathered very good image of your institution and i know you will consider my request on serious note. I would like you to take serious action on the teacher who are spoiling the careers of the students. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
PJS
Dear Sir,
I have been  
joined
 a Computer application course in PHP two months ago in your institute. It was going  
really
 well in the beginning  
but
 after eight weeks, I realized it is not going as mentioned of the brochure. In admission brochure there  
was mentioned
 6 steps which  
are related
 to PHP technology  
ie
: Introduction, Implementation of PHP,  
Uses
 of conditions, If else fundamentals, benefits of PHP and Project. In my  
class
 tutors are not serious and  
also
 they taught us lessons which are out of the scope. I have mentioned them these topics are not useful for us  
but
 they denied and  
told
 me we are teaching these topics from last 2 years. I have gathered  
very
  good
 image of your institution and  
i
 know you will consider my request on serious note.  
I
 would like you to take serious action on the teacher who are spoiling the careers of the students.  
I
 look forward to hearing from you  
soon
.
Yours  
Faithfully
, 
PJS
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