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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper Write a letter to the restaurant applying for the job In your letter explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when v.1

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper Write a letter to the restaurant applying for the job In your letter explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, This is in response to your advertisement about your need for a waiter to work in your lucrative restaurant. I passed out Bachelors in Culinary arts in the year 2008. Since then, I am a kitchen assistant cum floor waiter in the Hilton hotel located near Heathrow airport. My last job roles include: cleaning cutlery, waiting at the table to welcome guests, serving breakfast or main courses of the day to the guests, settling bills, dressing the tables once they leave and finally, taking telephone and online orders. I can guarantee that I will easily fit into your organisation as I already have hands on experience in this area. To elaborate my strengths: positive attitude with customers which aids in conflict resolution, fluent in 3 languages (English, French and Spanish), able to deal with arduous tasks i. e. willing to put in good efforts to complete all responsibilities by the end of the day and finally, I am scrupulous; meaning, I accept my accountability to fulfill my employment contract with honesty. I am available immediately for an interview. Sincerely, Jack Dan
Dear Sir or Madam,

This is in response to your advertisement about your need for a waiter to work in your lucrative restaurant.

I passed out Bachelors in Culinary arts in the year 2008. Since then, I am a kitchen assistant
cum
floor waiter in the Hilton hotel located near
Heathrow airport
. My last job roles include: cleaning cutlery, waiting at the table to welcome guests, serving breakfast or main courses of the day to the guests, settling bills, dressing the tables once they
leave
and
finally
, taking telephone and online orders.

I can guarantee that I will
easily
fit into your
organisation
as I already have hands on experience in this area. To elaborate my strengths:
positive
attitude with customers which aids in conflict resolution, fluent in 3 languages (English, French and Spanish), able to deal with arduous tasks
i. e.
willing to put in
good
efforts to complete all responsibilities by the
end
of the day and
finally
, I am scrupulous; meaning, I accept my accountability to fulfill my employment contract with honesty.

I am available immediately for an interview.

Sincerely
,

Jack Dan
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper Write a letter to the restaurant applying for the job In your letter explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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