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Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation. v.3

Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation. v. 3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Block ‘D’ of the housing society in Oregon, where you hold the position of the Mayor. I am writing this letter to notify you of a certain callous attitude of some young children. I am hoping you would take immediate action to curb the problem. By virtue of this letter, it is to bring to your attention that certain adolescents who reside in our society are creating a dangerous situation by letting their dogs run wildly throughout society. These dogs are on the loose and not muzzled. Children are in constant fear about the threat of a possible confrontation with a dog. Moreover, it is difficult for elderly residents to have an evening stroll in the park due to the same fear. In view of this, it is my humble request to issue a letter, through the medium of your office, to make the parents of such adolescents aware of the grim situation. Only a few teenagers irresponsible and careless behaviour and attitude are causing big trouble. I hope you would take proper action before a serious incident takes place. Yours faithfully, Neeraj Mehra
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of Block ‘D’ of the housing society in Oregon, where you hold the position of the Mayor. I am writing this letter to notify you of a certain callous attitude of
some
young children.
I
am hoping you would take immediate action to curb the problem.

By virtue of this letter, it is to bring to your attention that certain adolescents who reside in our society are creating a
dangerous
situation by letting their dogs run
wildly
throughout society. These dogs are on the loose and not muzzled. Children are in constant fear about the threat of a possible confrontation with a dog.
Moreover
, it is difficult for elderly residents to have an evening stroll in the park due to the same fear.

In view of this, it is my humble request to issue a letter, through the medium of your office, to
make
the parents of such adolescents aware of the grim situation.
Only
a few
teenagers
irresponsible and careless
behaviour
and attitude are causing
big
trouble.

I hope you would take proper action
before
a serious incident takes place.

Yours
faithfully
,

Neeraj
Mehra
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation. v. 3

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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