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Recently you have attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the result. Write a letter to HR manager of the company. In your letter, you should: • give details of the job • tell why you think the interview went well v.2

Recently you have attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the result. Write a letter to HR manager of the company. In your letter, you should: • give details of the job • tell why you think the interview went well v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing you for the interview which take place at Law Firm Karu Wednesday afternoon 2 pm. I am applying for the attorney' s position, who especialize criminal and corporation law which is my speciality. I graduated my masters degree four years ago and currently working as a attorney at Law Firm Rebane. I think that the interview this Wednesday went well because Law Firm Karu can offer me challenges and cases which can make a difference for the court system. Athmosphere and colleagues were nice and overall work mode is very suitable for my aspects. I would like to know if I am suitable for this position. Law Firm where I currently work also made me an offer but I rather join with Law Firm Karu instead. I also have to give 30 days notice before I can leave. Looking forward from hearing you Yours faithfully Jane Austin
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing you for the interview which take place at
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Law
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Firm
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Karu
Wednesday afternoon 2 pm.

I am applying for the
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attorney&
#039; s position, who
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especialize
criminal and corporation
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law
which is my
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speciality
.
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I
graduated my
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masters
degree four years ago and
currently
working as
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
attorney at
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Law
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Firm
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Rebane
.

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I
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think
that the interview this Wednesday went well
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because
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Law
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Firm
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Karu
can offer me challenges and cases which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a difference for the court system.
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Athmosphere
and colleagues were nice and
overall
work mode is
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very
suitable for my aspects.

I would like to know if I am suitable for this position.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Law
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Firm
where I
currently
work
also
made me an offer
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but
I
rather
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join
with
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Law
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Firm
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Karu
instead
. I
also
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have to
give 30 days notice
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before
I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
.

Looking forward from hearing you

Yours
faithfully


Jane Austin
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes
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IELTS letter Recently you have attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the result. Write a letter to HR manager of the company. In your letter, you should: • give details of the job • tell why you think the interview went well v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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