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A friend you made while youe were studing abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. In your letter - Tell your friend v.2

A friend you made while youe were studing abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. In your letter - Tell your friend v. 2
Dear Parth, Happy to know about you after such a long time. I got your letter last week and I am writing this latter in response to find the job in my location. One of my friends is running a coaching class of the computer courses near to my home. He has requirement of trainer who have good knowledge about various computer languages like C, C++, Java and many others. You have to provide the coaching for whole day and surely you will get the satisfactory reward. As you completed the master degree in computer science with me, I know your are the best choise for this vacancy. Additionally, you have 2 years of experience in the same field. The coaching class has a website - www. goodcoaching. com. You can directly apply from there in career section of the website. Also, mention my name in detail section as a reference. Lots of love, Kalpesh Sangani.
Dear
Parth
,

Happy to know about you after such a long time. I
got
your letter last
week and
I am writing this latter in response to find the job in my location.

One of my friends is running a coaching
class
of the computer courses near to my home. He has requirement of trainer who have
good
knowledge about various computer languages like C, C++, Java and
many
others. You
have to
provide the coaching for whole day and
surely
you will
get
the satisfactory reward. As you completed the master degree in computer science with me, I know your are the best
choise
for this vacancy.
Additionally
, you have 2 years of experience in the same field.

The coaching
class
has a website
-
www
.
goodcoaching
.
com
. You can
directly
apply from there in career section of the website.
Also
, mention my name in detail section as a reference.

Lots of
love
,

Kalpesh
Sangani
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend you made while youe were studing abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. In your letter - Tell your friend v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
156 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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