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Task-1You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- say why he or she would not enjoy going to colleg v.1

Task-1You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- say why he or she would not enjoy going to colleg v. 1
Dear Karm, Hope you are well. It was good to learn that you like your new apartment and have managed to make quite a few friends. Well, I was very pleased to have received your letter seeking my advice. You have taken a bold step of moving to a new country and you shall always have my support in all your endeavors. In my opinion, you shouldn' t join college yet, as you have enough liabilities to cater. It' s only been a month since you moved! I suggest you take up a job instead, move to the city center after a few months. Use this time to look up course you are interested in, so you can save enough and afford your own tuition fee for the following new academic year. You are a talented lad, and finding a job won' t be a very difficult task. However, try and look for jobs related to the hospitality sector so that it looks good on your professional portfolio as well. Don' t hesitate to try a new career path. I hope you will take my advice, although I do believe you must follow your own will. We have known each other for over twenty years, and I' m glad that you consider me as your confidant. Anyway, Good luck with your job hunt and stay in touch. Warm regards, Natalie
Dear
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Karm
,

Hope you are well. It was
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good
to learn that you like your
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new
apartment and have managed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
quite a few friends. Well, I was
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very
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pleased
to have received your letter seeking my advice.

You have taken a bold step of moving to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
country and you shall always have my support in all your endeavors. In my opinion, you
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shouldn&
#039; t
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join
college
yet
, as you have
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enough
liabilities to cater.
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It&
#039; s
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only
been a month since you
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moved
!

I suggest you take up a
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job
instead
,
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move
to the city center after a few months.
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Use
this time to look up course you
are interested
in,
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so
you can save
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enough
and afford your
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own
tuition fee for the following
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new
academic year.

You are a talented lad, and finding a
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job
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won&
#039; t be a
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very
difficult task.
However
,
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
try and
look for
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jobs
related to the hospitality sector
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so
that it looks
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good
on your professional portfolio
as well
.
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Don&
#039; t hesitate to try a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
career path.

I hope you will take my advice, although I do believe you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
follow your
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own
will. We have known each other for over twenty years, and
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I&
#039; m glad that you consider me as your confidant. Anyway,
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Good
luck with your
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job
hunt and stay in touch.

Warm regards,

Natalie
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter Task-1You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- say why he or she would not enjoy going to colleg v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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