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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 2

Dear Sir or Madam, I cannot really believe that I am writing such a letter to you about the messy rubbish collecting situation in my neighbourhood. And I am hoping that your mediation would solve the problem. The garbage management authority in my area these days are not really picking up the rubbish in due time. Sometimes, the rubbishes are even left for days, especially the liquid and organic waste, which become decomposed and then eventually spread foul smell all over. However, it wouldn’t exactly be so bad if some wild animals were not able to penetrate into the garbage bin to increases the risk of spreading some bad diseases. Besides, we feel really abashed when some of our friends and relatives complain about the foul smell in our neighbourhood while visiting us. So, it is indeed a really embarrassing situation for a country like ours where the waste management system has been generally good over the years. Therefore, I would like to request you to look into the matter and get some serious and trained professionals to get the job done in order to ensure a clean and disease-free neighbourhood for us. Yours faithfully, Jane Nancy

IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v.2

Dear Sir or Madam, I cannot
really
believe that I am writing such a letter to you about the messy rubbish collecting situation in my
neighbourhood
. And I am hoping that your mediation would solve the problem. The garbage management authority in my area these days are not
really
picking up the rubbish in due time.
Sometimes
, the rubbishes are even
left
for days,
especially
the liquid and organic waste, which become decomposed and then
eventually
spread foul smell all over.
However
, it wouldn’t exactly be
so
bad
if
some
wild animals were not able to penetrate into the garbage bin to
increases
the
risk
of spreading
some
bad
diseases.
Besides
, we feel
really
abashed when
some
of our friends and relatives complain about the foul smell in our
neighbourhood
while visiting us.
So
, it is
indeed
a
really
embarrassing situation for a country like ours where the waste management system has been
generally
good
over the years.
Therefore
, I would like to request you to look into the matter and
get
some
serious and trained professionals to
get
the job done in order to ensure a clean and disease-free
neighbourhood
for us. Yours
faithfully
, Jane Nancy
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Letter
6 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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