Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express a grave situation that the community of "Lake West Spring" is facing due to the faulty and inadequate rubbish management system, especially for the last three to four weeks.
With relation to the problems, the number of rubbish bins installed in the area is insufficient considering the total population. Moreover, for the last couple of weeks, garbage collector's lorries have not been picking up the trash in time, and deposit of all waste has started to scatter around the bins or on the streets.
Since the garbage bins are overflowing with litter, it attracts some street dogs who rampage the rubish every night. It has also become a breeding ground for mosquitoes, houseflies and other insects which can lead to the spread of infectious diseases. Moreover, the bad odour from garbage has started reaching our house which hampers our peaceful and healthy living.
I would like to suggest that the local council look into the matter urgently and make sure the garbage lorries come to our community every other day to empty the bins. Besides, for a long-term solution, more large waste bins should be erected in the region as soon as possible and the garbage should definitely be picked up in a timely manner.
I hope you will take immediate measures to solve the problems and consider my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
Elmina Rose
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express a grave situation that the community of  
"
Lake West Spring 
"
 is facing due to the faulty and inadequate rubbish management system,  
especially
 for the last three to four weeks.
With relation to the problems, the number of rubbish bins installed in the area is insufficient considering the total population.  
Moreover
, for the last couple of weeks, garbage collector's lorries have not been picking up the trash in time, and deposit of all waste has  
started
 to scatter around the bins or on the streets.
Since the garbage bins are overflowing with litter, it attracts  
some
 street dogs who rampage the  
rubish
 every night. It has  
also
 become a breeding ground for mosquitoes, houseflies and other insects which can lead to the spread of infectious diseases.  
Moreover
, the  
bad
  odour
 from garbage has  
started
 reaching our  
house
 which hampers our peaceful and healthy living.
I would like to suggest that the local council look into the matter  
urgently
 and  
make
 sure the garbage lorries  
come
 to our community every other day to empty the bins.  
Besides
, for a long-term solution, more large waste bins should  
be erected
 in the region as  
soon
 as possible and the garbage should definitely  
be picked
 up in a timely manner.
I hope you will take immediate measures to solve the problems and consider my suggestions.
Yours  
faithfully
, 
Elmina
 Rose
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