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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T shirt Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T shirt
The given illustration provides information abot the whole process of turning harvested cotton into a T- shirt. The process starts when the cotton is harvested by cotton picker. Afterward, the harvested cotton is pressed into bales and shipped to the manufactories by trucks. Those bales of cotton are threaded and weaved so as to become fabrics. Because fabrics have no color so that they are designed and dyed in the next steps. Finally, the cloth is completed into a T-shirt. The finished cotton T-shirts are packaged and sent to the fashion shops. Those products are bought and used by the consumer, which lead to the final stage of the process - disposal stage. The cotton T-shirts can be burned or dumped into trash but the best way is recycling those one. Overall, the cycle of a simple cotton T-shirt has three major stages which are production, consumption and disposal.
The
given
illustration provides information
abot
the whole process of turning harvested cotton into a T- shirt.

The process
starts
when the cotton
is harvested
by cotton picker. Afterward, the harvested cotton
is pressed
into bales and shipped to the
manufactories
by trucks. Those bales of cotton
are threaded
and weaved
so as to
become fabrics.
Because
fabrics have no color
so
that they
are designed
and dyed in the
next
steps.
Finally
, the cloth
is completed
into a T-shirt.

The finished cotton T-shirts
are packaged
and
sent
to the fashion shops. Those products are
bought
and
used
by the consumer, which lead to the final stage of the process
-
disposal stage. The cotton T-shirts can
be burned
or dumped into trash
but
the best way is recycling those one.

Overall
, the cycle of a simple cotton T-shirt has three major stages which are production, consumption and disposal.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T shirt

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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