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YOU HAD BORROWED A BOOK FROM LIBRARY. HOWEVER, WHEN YOU REACHED HOME, YOU FOUND THAT SOME IMPORTANT PAGES WERE TORN AWAY. WRITE A LETTER TO THE LIBRARIAN EXPLAINING THE SITUATION. YOU SHOULDMENTION THE BOOKMENTION THE PAGESSUGGEST WHAT CAN BE DONE v.2

YOU HAD BORROWED A BOOK FROM LIBRARY. HOWEVER, WHEN YOU REACHED HOME, YOU FOUND THAT SOME IMPORTANT PAGES WERE TORN AWAY. WRITE A LETTER TO THE LIBRARIAN EXPLAINING THE SITUATION. YOU SHOULDMENTION THE BOOKMENTION THE PAGESSUGGEST WHAT CAN BE DONE v. 2
Dear Ma' am, I am a student of the 3rd semester from Electronics and Communication branch, studying at our college. I brought a book from the library, namely " Thermodynamics" in which I found some pages were torn away. Please allow me to elaborate on the problem further. To begin with, last week I issued the book from the library, I started doing preparation for the exams at my home. After solving an exercise I found solutions were missing in Chapter 2 and 3. When I checked with Index, actually pages were torn away. Moreover, in the last section of the book, previous year papers were also missing numbering from page 18 to 23. Therefore, I request you to fix this issue by pasting xerox copy of the original book where pages are missing. Since mostly answers and vital exercises are missing in the book. It is essential to complete the book with proper mending. Waiting to receive a prompt response on this matter. Yours sincerely, Rekha Rastogi
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begin
with, last week I issued the
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book
from the library, I
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started
doing preparation for the exams at my home. After solving an exercise I found solutions were
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missing
in Chapter 2 and 3. When I
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checked
with Index, actually pages
were torn
away.
Moreover
, in the last section of the
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book
, previous year papers were
also
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missing
numbering from page 18 to 23.

Therefore
, I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
this issue by pasting xerox copy of the original
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
where pages are
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missing
. Since
mostly
answers and vital exercises are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
missing
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. It is essential to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
with proper mending.

Waiting to receive a prompt response on this matter.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Rekha
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Rastogi
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IELTS letter YOU HAD BORROWED A BOOK FROM LIBRARY. HOWEVER, WHEN YOU REACHED HOME, YOU FOUND THAT SOME IMPORTANT PAGES WERE TORN AWAY. WRITE A LETTER TO THE LIBRARIAN EXPLAINING THE SITUATION. YOU SHOULDMENTION THE BOOKMENTION THE PAGESSUGGEST WHAT CAN BE DONE v. 2

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