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One of your colleagues recently got a new job at another company. write a letter to him/her and say how you feel about him/ herwhat you enjoyed the most while working together andask what his/her future plans are v.2

One of your colleagues recently got a new job at another company. write a letter to him/her and say how you feel about him/ herwhat you enjoyed the most while working together andask what his/her future plans are v. 2
Dear Sam, Hope your doing good, I am glad to know that you got a new job in one of the top trending company. I really feel proud and joyful that you got selected to work with the well renowned organisation, it was a dream for you to work with such a top company in the market and it' s a pleasure to watch a close mates who had got a great opportunity and excelled in very aspect like you. I always had the complete trust and confidence on you that you will do big on your career. It was a great pleasure to work with you a colleague and I have learnt a lot from you in career perspective and learnt how to have a balance work life. You have been such an inspiration to me and all other colleagues in our organisation. I know that you will have plans running on your mind, being your close friend more than a colleague i have understood your further course action and plans. But I can never predict your moves at certain stages as your very smart enough to handle things, Do let me know your future plans and am expecting for some good news as you told me that your planning to get married. Cheers mate, hope you and your family is all fine, please do keep in touch and my mobile number and my house address remains the same, so you can ring me anytime or walk up to my house as its always open for you and one gorgeous women will give you yummy food at anytime as u know it' s my mother. Warm Regard' s Sarath
Dear Sam,

Hope your doing
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good
, I am glad to
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know
that you
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got
a new job in one of the top trending
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company
.

I
really
feel proud and joyful that you
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got
selected to
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work
with the well renowned
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organisation
, it was a dream for you to
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work
with such a top
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company
in the market and
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it&
#039; s a pleasure to
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watch
a close mates who had
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got
a great opportunity and excelled in
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very
aspect like you. I always had the complete trust and confidence on you that you will do
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big
on your career. It was a great pleasure to
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work
with you a colleague and I have
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learnt
a lot from you in career perspective and
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learnt
how to have a balance
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work
life. You have been such an inspiration to me and all other colleagues in our
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organisation
.

I
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know
that you will have plans running on your mind, being your close friend more than a colleague
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i
have understood your
further
course action and plans.
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But
I can never predict your
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moves
at certain stages as your
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very
smart
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enough
to handle things, Do
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let
me
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know
your future plans and
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am
expecting for
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some
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good
news as you
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told
me that
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your
planning to
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get
married.

Cheers mate, hope you and your family is all fine,
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please
do
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keep
in touch and my mobile number and my
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house
address remains the same,
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so
you can ring me anytime or walk up to my
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house
as its always open for you and one gorgeous women will give you yummy food at anytime as u
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know
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it&
#039; s my mother.

Warm
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Regard&
#039; s

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Sarath
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS letter One of your colleagues recently got a new job at another company. write a letter to him/her and say how you feel about him/ herwhat you enjoyed the most while working together andask what his/her future plans are v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
279 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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