Dear Sir,
In intend to write this letter to grab your attention to an important concern. It is heard that the sports center situated in our area is going to be shutdown. I would like to tell you that all community residents strongly oppose this idea as this center is the only entertainment place for the families living here. The center is always crowded with families living nearby, where they spend quality time with their kids and elders. This center provides certain leisure services under one roof such as fine-dining, play area for toddlers and sports club for youngsters.
I would like to assert my point that demolishing the sports center will be detrimental. As this place provides an opportunity to all the residents to mingle up and extend their social circle. Furthermore, this place also provides affordable luxury to most of the salaried class families here, who cannot afford to go to expensive play areas and restaurant every week.
This sports center also paves ways for good sportsperson of this community by recommending them to official sports teams such as national cricket and football selection teams. This decision will close the opportunity door for talented children of this area. This place is not only visited by young people but also retired people meet here every day, where they enjoy their evening tea and watch children playing. Therefore, please review this matter and revert your decision.
Yours Truly,
Sam
Dear Sir,
In intend to write this letter to grab your attention to an
important
concern. It
is heard
that the
sports
center situated in our
area
is going to be shutdown. I would like to
tell
you that all community residents
strongly
oppose this
idea
as this center is the
only
entertainment
place
for the families living here. The center is always crowded with families living nearby, where they spend quality time with their kids and elders. This center provides certain leisure services under one roof such as fine-dining, play
area
for toddlers and
sports
club for youngsters.
I would like to assert my point that demolishing the
sports
center will be detrimental. As this
place
provides an opportunity to all the residents to mingle up and extend their social circle.
Furthermore
, this
place
also
provides affordable luxury to most of the salaried
class
families here, who cannot afford to go to expensive play
areas
and restaurant every week.
This
sports
center
also
paves ways for
good
sportsperson of this community by recommending them to official
sports
teams such as national cricket and football selection teams. This decision will close the opportunity door for talented children of this
area
.
This
place
is not
only
visited by young
people
but
also
retired
people
meet
here every day, where they enjoy their evening tea and
watch
children playing.
Therefore
,
please
review this matter and revert your decision.
Yours
Truly
,
Sam
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