I totally agree to the decision of the state to build a social house near my community because that helps a lot the poor people. I think in this way because we all would contribute in different forms to be near to the particular group of our community. while we have our houses and protection, they dream only to have food in their houses and risk their lives. in my opinion, the social house will be the greatest idea.
Firstly, this particular group of community with low incomes is part of our life. as we find out the way to help them the social houses are perfect idea because we can supply a lot of things there such as food, clothes, furniture etc. for example when I met poor people in ordinary life always I think about the way to give something, but I have low possibility to give furniture because they live in street. in this case when I heard about the social house where they live I went there to send a bed for children and electro. but for me, that house was so far. having a social house means that a lot of people can send their furniture and much more.
secondly out of the possibility to rent a house these people risk their life living on the streets. they live in the street because do not have another choice. . for example, yesterday I head on the news that a poor man was attacked by street dogs. he lived in street and while he was going to sleep in the park there happened was attack by dogs. overall building a social house means to have food, water, and a secure life.
in conclusion will be a better life for all homeless person and poor people in my community living in a social house. in this way, they can have food, water and somewhere to sleep without risk their life.
I
totally
agree
to the decision of the state to build a
social
house
near my
community
because
that
helps
a lot the
poor
people
. I
think
in this way
because
we all would contribute in
different
forms to be near to the particular group of our
community
.
while
we have our
houses
and protection, they dream
only
to have
food
in their
houses
and
risk
their
lives
.
in
my opinion, the
social
house
will be the greatest
idea
.
Firstly
, this particular group of
community
with low incomes is part of our
life
.
as
we find out the way to
help
them the
social
houses
are perfect
idea
because
we can supply
a lot of
things there such as
food
, clothes, furniture etc.
for example
when I met
poor
people
in ordinary
life
always I
think
about the way to give something,
but
I have low possibility to give furniture
because
they
live
in
street
.
in
this case when I heard about the
social
house
where they
live
I went there to
send
a bed for children and
electro
.
but
for me, that
house
was
so
far.
having
a
social
house
means that
a lot of
people
can
send
their furniture and much more.
secondly
out of the possibility to rent a
house
these
people
risk
their
life
living on the
streets
.
they
live
in the
street
because
do not have another choice.
.
for
example, yesterday I head on the news that a
poor
man
was attacked
by
street
dogs.
he
lived
in
street
and while he was going to sleep in the park there happened was attack by dogs.
overall
building a
social
house
means to have
food
, water, and a secure life.
in
conclusion will be a better
life
for all homeless person and
poor
people
in my
community
living in a
social
house
.
in
this way, they can have
food
, water and somewhere to sleep without
risk
their
life
.
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49Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes