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Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right v.3

Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right v. 3
Many people believe that first impression is the last impression. Meeting people for the first time gives a long-lasting impression on our minds. In my opinion, first impression when we meet someone is not always right. We should not be judgmental towards people, on the basis of meeting them for the first time. If we look at a person for the very first time and according to their personality or behaviour and spontaneously keep on judging them, then it would be completely unfair towards that person. We do not know what a person actually is in their personal life, or what he is going through, or the reason of his current mood, or anything. A first impression can be good or even bad. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg, who is the founder of Facebook. If we do not know this fact and look at him what he wears, then we can never recognize that he's such a big business tycoon. I believe that most people try to show their best whenever they're meeting someone for the first time. In that particular time period, it becomes very difficult to judge someone truly, because within that time we try to understand a person and trust them with their true selves by what they are showing to us. To conclude, first impression is not always right. So, whatever a person shows in their first meeting should not be trusted fully, or judged according to his current situation, because we do not know them personally. We should always try to know about them before creating a fake image in our head on the basis of their first meeting.
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and trust them with their true selves by what they are showing to us.

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is not always right.
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IELTS essay Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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