Some opine that paintings, drawings, and sculptures are essential courses for every youngster in study whilst others believe that these are not necessary. Although some arts like music and films may provide a luxurious lifestyle, I think that other subjects such as Engineering, Medicine and Law provide the perfect ingredients of a more satisfying life.
On the one hand, there are some people think that art classes will inspire children to become a movie star and later they will have an abundance life with money and fame. Singers, film stars inspired lots of individuals and they believe their offsprings can achieve that glamour if there are some classes on acting, singing and dancing. For example, Keanu Reeves used to act on stage in his school in Toronto and later he received a call from one of the producers to act in a TV show. However, I don't think every student gets chance like that and later they become frustrated and take the wrong lifestyle.
On the other hand, some people think the subjects like Law, Biology, Geography, Mathematics and Medicine have more value to build a career after graduation. It is much essential to select courses which will provide better opportunities when children are grown up than stardom. For instance, in the field of Medicine there are lots of opportunities to work because there is not enough doctors in the planet earth for the patients. Even an inspired child can do a charity for the poor and sufferers. I believe, parents should emphasize more on how to make their children a better person than glamours.
In conclusion, although there are some art subjects provide luxurious life and some people think school should give more importance to them, it is better to have a school where subjects like Math, Medicine and Law gets higher value.
Some
opine that paintings, drawings, and sculptures are essential courses for every youngster in study whilst others believe that these are not necessary. Although
some
arts like music and films may
provide
a luxurious lifestyle, I
think
that other
subjects
such as Engineering,
Medicine
and Law
provide
the perfect ingredients of a more satisfying life.
On the one hand, there are
some
people
think
that art classes will inspire children to become a movie star and later they will have an abundance life with money and fame. Singers, film stars inspired lots of
individuals and
they believe their
offsprings can
achieve that glamour if there are
some
classes on acting, singing and dancing.
For example
, Keanu Reeves
used
to act on stage in his school in Toronto and later he received a call from one of the producers to act in a TV
show
.
However
, I don't
think
every student
gets
chance like that and later they become frustrated and take the
wrong
lifestyle.
On the other hand
,
some
people
think
the
subjects
like Law, Biology, Geography, Mathematics and
Medicine
have more value to build a career after graduation. It is much essential to select courses which will
provide
better opportunities when children
are grown
up than stardom.
For instance
, in the field of
Medicine
there are lots of opportunities to work
because
there is not
enough
doctors in the planet earth for the patients. Even an inspired child can do a charity for the poor and sufferers. I believe, parents should emphasize more on how to
make
their children a better person than glamours.
In conclusion
, although there are
some
art
subjects
provide
luxurious life and
some
people
think
school should give more importance to them, it is better to have a school where
subjects
like Math,
Medicine
and Law
gets
higher value.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes