In the last decades the technology developed, so the information could get easily no matter the geographical position. This can be the reason why nowadays more than in the past more and more people are aware of the major problems that our planet confronts. From my point of view the youth plays an important role in finding solutions for fighting and solving these problems.
To begin with, with the help of the modern technology young people can get information and conduct researches themselves about these disturbing problems. Internet access gives the younger generation the opportunity to communicate with people from different parts of the world. For instance, they can use the computers to search information about one of the most controversial issue, which is the protection of the environment. Poverty is another major problem which is always on the agenda of the international organizations, but it is also a subject for younger generation which tries to make a difference.
Although there are many subjects where it can be seen the difference of the awareness of the present generation, none of them is so obvious as the one concerning the welfare of the animals. At this moment there are many organizations which protect the animal lives. Moreover, the government was involved in creating and protecting natural reservations in order to preserve species which endangered.
In conclusion, the world faces many issues and both generations should focus to protect and preserve the environment together with its natural resources and animals, as well as helping different charities and non-gouvernemental organizations
In the last decades the technology developed,
so
the information could
get
easily
no matter the geographical position. This can be the reason why nowadays more than in the past more and more
people
are aware of the major problems that our planet confronts. From my point of view the youth plays an
important
role in finding solutions for fighting and solving these problems.
To
begin
with, with the
help
of the modern technology young
people
can
get
information and conduct researches themselves about these disturbing problems. Internet access gives the younger generation the opportunity to communicate with
people
from
different
parts of the world.
For instance
, they can
use
the computers to search information about one of the most controversial
issue
, which is the protection of the environment. Poverty is another major problem which is always on the agenda of the international organizations,
but
it is
also
a subject for younger generation which tries to
make
a difference.
Although there are
many
subjects where it can be
seen
the difference of the awareness of the present generation, none of them is
so
obvious as the one concerning the welfare of the animals. At this moment there are
many
organizations which protect the animal
lives
.
Moreover
, the
government
was involved
in creating and protecting natural reservations in order to preserve species which endangered.
In conclusion
, the world faces
many
issues and both generations should focus to protect and preserve the environment together with its natural resources and animals,
as well
as helping
different
charities and
non-gouvernemental
organizations
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes