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You will now read a short passage and listen to a lecture on the same topic. You will then be asked a question about themIn everyday life, when people speak of memory, they are almost always speaking about what psychologists would call explicit memories. v.1

You will now read a short passage and listen to a lecture on the same topic. You will then be asked a question about themIn everyday life, when people speak of memory, they are almost always speaking about what psychologists would call explicit memories. v. 1
Nowadays, many individuals argue that worldwide touristry that this is having a negative impact on their country. This essay will suggest that the principal cause of the issue is the bad influence on the environment of the country and a possible solution is to inform travellers to put waste into the right place or to use public transport. The main cause of the negative attitude of people towards international travel is an increase in the level of environmental pollution that is mostly done by tourists. Numerous travellers throw rubbish into the surroundings due to the irresponsibility characteristics. Furthermore, tourists really use transport more than inhabitants and because of this air quality is decreasing at the tourist destination. As an example, according to the Center report, aircraft emit big amounts of CO2, the most prevalent man-made greenhouse gas. However, some measures could be implemented to change the negative attitude of the local people about international tourism. The solution is that to inform travellers to put rubbish into the right place. International touristry brings opportunities to develop the economy of the host country as well as creating more jobs for the people living in the tourist trap. So, locals must remember about it. For instance, the campaigns of collecting rubbish on the beach should be done with the participation of foreign visitors. To conclude, there are some factors lead to local people think international travel is bad thing such as a negative influence on the environment. To deal with those negative attitudes, government should inform tourists to protect the nature and do not waste.
Nowadays,
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many
individuals argue that worldwide
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touristry
that this is having a
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negative
impact on their country. This essay will suggest that the principal cause of the issue is the
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bad
influence on the environment of the country and a possible solution is to inform
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travellers
to put waste into the right place or to
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use
public transport.

The main cause of the
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negative
attitude of
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people
towards
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international
travel is an increase in the level of environmental pollution
that is
mostly
done by
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tourists
. Numerous
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travellers
throw rubbish into the surroundings due to the irresponsibility characteristics.
Furthermore
,
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tourists
really
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use
transport more than inhabitants and
because of this
air quality is decreasing at the
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tourist
destination. As an example, according to the Center report, aircraft emit
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big
amounts of CO2, the most prevalent
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man
-made greenhouse gas.

However
,
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some
measures could
be implemented
to
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change
the
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negative
attitude of the local
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people
about
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international
tourism. The solution is that to inform
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travellers
to put rubbish into the right place.
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International
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touristry
brings opportunities to develop the economy of the host country
as well
as creating more jobs for the
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people
living in the
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tourist
trap.
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So
, locals
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must
remember about it.
For instance
, the campaigns of collecting rubbish on the beach should
be done
with the participation of foreign visitors.

To conclude
, there are
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some
factors lead to local
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people
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think
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international
travel is
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bad
thing such as a
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negative
influence on the environment. To deal with those
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negative
attitudes,
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government
should inform
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tourists
to protect the nature and do not waste.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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He who knows no foreign languages know nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay You will now read a short passage and listen to a lecture on the same topic. You will then be asked a question about themIn everyday life, when people speak of memory, they are almost always speaking about what psychologists would call explicit memories. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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