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As writers, you want the dialogue in your story to have impact. Well, there are many ways to do that, and I’m gonna talk about two of them—exaggeration and understatement. Now, understatement is the opposite of exaggeration, but you can actually use t v.1

As writers, you want the dialogue in your story to have impact. Well, there are many ways to do that, and I’m gonna talk about two of them—exaggeration and understatement. Now, understatement is the opposite of exaggeration, but you can actually use t v. 1
The medicals have stressed that the current lifestyle of people does not include physical workouts. People are more tending to towards the sedentary lifestyle. This issue is concerned at a lack of exercise leads to many health problems. On one hand, today we live in a more competitive and progressive world. Everybody struggles to earn more money. Most of them spend hours at work and does not have time to exercise. For instance, people who are employed in offices spend on average of nine hours at work. After work they return home exhausted and do not have energy for exercise, due to they have home routines yet. Secondly, one of the main reasons for the unhealthy habit is the influence of technology in all aspects of life. For examples, we can see that children prefer to stay home to play video games rather than getting involved in outdoor activities. On the other hand, people can do some exercises at work or home. For instance, during break hours in the office, they can climb the stair of a couple of floors or can go for a small walk. Also, instead of driving to work, a person can substitute it cycling to work. The offices should make zones for a workout or activities, trainings due to employers will have more energy for work. In conclusion, a person should include physical exercise in their daily routine due to if people focus on their health, they will be feeling better and does not have problems with their health.
The medicals have
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stressed
that the
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current
lifestyle of
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people
does not include physical workouts.
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People
are more tending to towards the sedentary lifestyle. This issue
is concerned
at a lack of
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exercise
leads to
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many
health problems.

On one hand,
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today
we
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live
in a more competitive and progressive world. Everybody struggles to earn more money. Most of them spend hours at
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work
and does not have time to
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exercise
.
For instance
,
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people
who
are employed
in offices spend on average of nine hours at
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work
. After
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work they
return home exhausted and do not have energy for
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exercise
, due to they have home routines
yet
.
Secondly
, one of the main reasons for the unhealthy habit is the influence of technology in all aspects of life. For examples, we can
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see
that children prefer to stay home to play video games
rather
than getting involved in outdoor activities.

On the other hand
,
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people
can do
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some
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exercises
at
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work
or home.
For instance
, during break hours in the office, they can climb the stair of a couple of floors or can go for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
walk.
Also
,
instead
of driving to
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work
, a person can substitute it cycling to
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work
. The offices should
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make
zones for a workout or activities, trainings due to employers will have more energy for work.

In conclusion
, a person should include physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercise
in their daily routine due to if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
focus on their health, they will be feeling better and does not have problems with their health.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay As writers, you want the dialogue in your story to have impact. Well, there are many ways to do that, and I’m gonna talk about two of them—exaggeration and understatement. Now, understatement is the opposite of exaggeration, but you can actually use t v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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