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You will go to London soon to stay there for one year Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation In your letter you should say why you are going to London what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive v.1

You will go to London soon to stay there for one year Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation In your letter you should say why you are going to London what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive v. 1
Dialect is an integral part of communication and explore the culture. However, it is generally considered that there are several ways to learn foreign language, but foreign speaking countries are an appropriate for it. I agree with the statement and this essay will discuss my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs. There are multifarious reasons why foreign nation is best to learn the international style. To illustrate, there are numbers of people who speak English in their regular life and they have more command on it so they can teach the learners with an effective way that how can they pronounce the word's, how can they get proficiently on the accent. To add more, the learners get an opportunity to speak the natives due to it they will communicate confidently with them. Moreover, the environment is also an essential to get familiar any type of speech. If, they will live with native speakers, then their curiosity will definitely boost. Therefore, overseas countries are better to improve and gain knowledge about international terminology. However, there are an alternative, methods because of this people can get command English. First of all, in the contemporary era, the Internet is used by almost all the populace, which is a suitable because there are numerous sites are approachable pertaining to English jargon. It helps to learn effectively with native speakers. Furthermore, dialect centre has opened everywhere, where people can learn languages according to their interest. In conclusion, after analysing all the aspects of the given statement, it is not hard to see that merely overseas speaking countries is not a method to learn foreign speech other ways play an equally important role.
Dialect is an integral part of communication and explore the culture.
However
, it is
generally
considered that there are several ways to
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learn
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foreign
language,
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but
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foreign
speaking countries are an appropriate for it. I
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agree
with the statement and this essay will discuss my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs.

There are multifarious reasons why
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foreign
nation is best to
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learn
the international style. To illustrate, there are numbers of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who speak English in their regular
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life and
they have more command on it
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so
they can teach the learners with an effective way that how can they pronounce the word's, how can they
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get
proficiently
on the accent. To
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add
more, the learners
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get
an opportunity to speak the natives due to
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it
they will communicate
confidently
with them.
Moreover
, the environment is
also
an essential to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
familiar any type of speech. If, they will
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live
with native speakers, then their curiosity will definitely boost.
Therefore
, overseas countries are better to
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improve
and gain knowledge about international terminology.

However
, there are an
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alternative
, methods
because of this
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people
can
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get
command English.
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First of all
, in the contemporary era, the Internet is
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used
by almost all the populace, which is a suitable
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because
there are numerous sites are approachable pertaining to English jargon. It
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helps
to
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learn
effectively
with native speakers.
Furthermore
, dialect
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centre
has opened everywhere, where
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people
can
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learn
languages according to their interest.

In conclusion
, after
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analysing
all the aspects of the
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given
statement, it is not
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hard
to
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see
that
merely
overseas speaking countries is not a method to
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learn
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speech other ways play an
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important
role.
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IELTS essay You will go to London soon to stay there for one year Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation In your letter you should say why you are going to London what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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