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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can t v.73

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can t v. 73
Technological and scientific advancements in the past decade, have had a huge impact on the human race and its environment. Life-threatening challenges such as overpopulation, ill-literacy, and environmental deterioration are some of the vices faced by many developing nations around the globe. India, being one of the most populated countries in the world, is sure to face the repercussions of its outcome. An overly populated nation stems out of a lack of appropriate education and awareness. This, in turn, leads to high levels of air, water, and soil pollution. Unemployment, lack of basic hygiene and health facilities and poverty, prove to be a constant challenge. However, the outcome of the prevailing conditions can be changed or reduced by taking specific measures. The government can introduce awareness programs on birth control. Impart education by setting up a larger number of local schools and university, especially in remote areas. Unemployment is the root cause of poverty. Health camps and hygiene centric programs can be conducted for the general public. Free basic medical assistance can be offered. Non-profitable organizations must be encouraged to contribute to society by setting up voluntary camps. Introducing special government policies, to ensure a basic standard of livelihood and health is essential. A global platform where all the countries unite and strive collectively towards eradication of poverty and global warming is utmost important. Organizations such as UNESCO, (United Nations Education, Scientific, Cultural Organization), is a unit that not only works towards a global improvement but also foresees and prevents global threats.
Technological and scientific advancements in the past decade, have had a huge impact on the human race and its environment. Life-threatening challenges such as overpopulation, ill-literacy, and environmental deterioration are
some of the
vices faced by
many
developing nations around the globe.

India, being one of the most populated countries in the world, is sure to face the repercussions of its outcome. An
overly
populated nation stems out of a lack of appropriate education and awareness. This, in turn, leads to high levels of air, water, and soil pollution. Unemployment, lack of basic hygiene and health facilities and poverty, prove to be a constant challenge.

However
, the outcome of the prevailing conditions can be
changed
or
reduced
by taking specific measures. The
government
can introduce awareness programs on birth control. Impart education by setting up a larger number of local schools and university,
especially
in remote areas. Unemployment is the root cause of poverty.

Health camps and hygiene centric programs can
be conducted
for the
general public
. Free basic medical assistance can
be offered
. Non-profitable organizations
must
be encouraged
to contribute to society by setting up voluntary camps. Introducing special
government
policies, to ensure a basic standard of livelihood and health is essential.

A
global
platform where all the countries unite and strive
collectively
towards eradication of poverty and
global
warming is utmost
important
. Organizations such as UNESCO, (United Nations Education, Scientific, Cultural Organization), is a unit that not
only
works towards a
global
improvement
but
also
foresees and
prevents
global
threats.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can t v. 73

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