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nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants why do you think people waste food what can be done to reduce the amount of food that throw away v.2

nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants why do you think people waste food what can be done to reduce the amount of food that throw away v. 2
Food is the fundamental need of human being. Presently, the trend of purchasing food from outside and throw waste food here and there is increasing day by day. Here, I would like to account it' s reasons along with it' s solutions. There are manifold reasons behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, food which are purchase from restaurant and shops is not eat from whole day because it is full of spices and other unhigenic things. Therefor, people like to throw waste food outside instead of use it again. Moreover, people can easily get mouth watering food from eminent shops and restaurants anytime, anywhere. So they do not realize the value of food and throw waste food without think. Numerous remedial measure can be mentioned. Intially, city authority must put some outlaw on throwing waste food, apart from it, government should encourage people about the use of waste food or tell them for helping those poor who do not get proper meal in the whole day, people should start preparing domestic food according to need. Hence, all these ideas will definitely reduce the amount of waste food. To recapitulate, Undeniably, purchase food from outside is not bad for working or food aholic person. However, still I believe that throwing waste food is not good for people and environment.
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Food
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Presently
, the trend of purchasing
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food
from outside and throw
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waste
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food
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First
and foremost,
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food
which are
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purchase
from restaurant and shops is not
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eat
from whole day
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because
it is full of spices and other
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unhigenic
things. Therefor,
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people
like to throw
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waste
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food
outside
instead
of
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use
it again.
Moreover
,
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people
can
easily
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get
mouth watering
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food
from eminent shops and restaurants anytime, anywhere.
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So
they do not realize the value of
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food
and throw
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waste
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food
without
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think
.

Numerous remedial measure can
be mentioned
.
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Intially
, city authority
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must
put
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some
outlaw on throwing
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waste
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food
, apart from it,
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government
should encourage
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people
about the
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use
of
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waste
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food
or
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tell
them for helping those poor who do not
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get
proper meal in the whole day,
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people
should
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start
preparing domestic
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food
according to need.
Hence
, all these
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ideas
will definitely
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reduce
the amount of
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waste
food.

To recapitulate,
Undeniably
,
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purchase
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food
from outside is not
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bad
for working or
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food
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aholic
person.
However
,
still
I believe that throwing
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waste
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food
is not
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good
for
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people
and environment.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants why do you think people waste food what can be done to reduce the amount of food that throw away v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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