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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in wha v.70

Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in wha v. 70
The trends in fashion and clothing are hard to wear by people moreover, their sole objective is to sell their clothing. Certain individuals have an opinion that people should wear dresses in which they feel more confident and comfortable. In my opinion, I do believe that the dressing style of people should be according to their taste and personality. In present time many famous designers exhibit their clothing designs on big m=platforms such as The Milan and The Paris fashion week. The pattern and style of dresses that models wear Is very difficult for a normal person to carry because of their unusual designs. Moreover, the designs, colours and styles change every year thus making people to spend a lion’s portion of their salary in purchasing these clothes. Actors and actresses undoubtedly spend lakhs to purchase and wear these dresses in award functions and parties in order to remain in publicity and to maintain their reputation in the glamourous world. However, I believe that people should wear dresses which makes them feel relaxes. Every person has a different personality and fashion identity; hence they should not copy others. They should wear dresses in which they feel more self-assured. Furthermore, instead of spending enormous part of their income on purchasing clothes, they should save money for future uncertainties and invest in profitable schemes. Additionally, it is undeniable true that whatever is shown in vogue fashion magazines and fashion channels by designers will always suit your body, as everyone has different physique and it is not sure that If it is looking good on fashion models it will look good on you. So people should not spend their money in wasteful and extravagant clothing In my opinion, I vehemently agree that people should dress according to their taste and preference rather than wearing uncomfortable clothes to please the society and people.
The trends in
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fashion
and clothing are
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hard
to
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wear
by
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people
moreover
, their sole objective is to sell their clothing. Certain individuals have an opinion that
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people
should
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wear
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dresses
in which they feel more confident and comfortable. In my opinion, I do believe that the dressing style of
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people
should be according to their taste and personality.

In present time
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many
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famous
designers exhibit their clothing designs on
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big
m=platforms such as The Milan and The Paris
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fashion
week. The pattern and style of
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dresses
that models
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wear
Is
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very
difficult for a normal person to carry
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because
of their unusual designs.
Moreover
, the designs,
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colours
and styles
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change
every year
thus
making
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people
to spend a lion’s portion of their salary in purchasing these clothes. Actors and actresses
undoubtedly
spend lakhs to
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purchase
and
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wear
these
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dresses
in award functions and parties in order to remain in publicity and to maintain their reputation in the
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glamourous
world.

However
, I believe that
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people
should
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wear
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dresses
which
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makes
them feel relaxes. Every person has a
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different
personality and
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fashion
identity;
hence
they should not copy others. They should
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wear
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dresses
in which they feel more self-assured.
Furthermore
,
instead
of spending enormous part of their income on purchasing clothes, they should save money for future uncertainties and invest in profitable schemes.
Additionally
, it is undeniable true that whatever
is shown
in vogue
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fashion
magazines and
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fashion
channels by designers will always suit your body, as everyone has
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different
physique and it is not sure that If it is looking
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good
on
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fashion
models it will look
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good
on you.
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So
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people
should not spend their money in wasteful and extravagant
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clothing


In my opinion, I
vehemently
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agree
that
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people
should
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dress
according to their taste and preference
rather
than wearing uncomfortable clothes to
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please
the society and
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people
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in wha v. 70

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
5.5
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