Nowadays, whether dangerous sports should be banned has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the public's attention. Some people believe that the dangerous sports should be banned, while others hold the view that there is no relation between dangerous sports and activities. In my opinion, the sports does influence human behaviour due to social and psychological reasons.
First and foremost, the social reason is why I think the sports influences human behaviour. Although, potentially negative impacts of dangerous sports must be taken into account. I still reckon that the existence of sports has in many ways enormously enriched people's lives. For example, a well-known American philosopher once said, people are generally happy to become a part of sport society. It is thus clearly shown that human behaviour is changed by different sports.
Besides, another factor that should be considered is the psychological reason. As far as the society is concerned, the ultimate aim of sports is to provide good health. For instance, a recent article published by the economist reveals that 80% of students become more healthy after a sport policy has been enacted. Undoubtedly, this is a clear indication that the dangerous sports have a positive impact on individuals' behaviour.
In conclusion, I hold the view that the dangerous sport changes human behaviour. To address this issue, the government and society should make a concerted effort to find solutions.
Nowadays, whether
dangerous
sports
should
be banned
has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the public's attention.
Some
people
believe that the
dangerous
sports
should
be banned
, while others hold the view that there is no relation between
dangerous
sports
and activities. In my opinion, the
sports
does influence
human
behaviour
due to social and psychological reasons.
First
and foremost, the social reason is why I
think
the
sports
influences
human
behaviour
.
Although
,
potentially
negative
impacts of
dangerous
sports
must
be taken
into account. I
still
reckon that the existence of
sports
has in
many
ways
enormously
enriched
people
's
lives
.
For example
, a well-known American philosopher once said,
people
are
generally
happy to become a part of
sport
society. It is
thus
clearly
shown that
human
behaviour
is
changed
by
different
sports.
Besides
, another factor that should
be considered
is the psychological reason. As far as the society
is concerned
, the ultimate aim of
sports
is to provide
good
health.
For instance
, a recent article published by the economist reveals that 80% of students become more healthy after a
sport
policy has
been enacted
.
Undoubtedly
, this is a
clear
indication that the
dangerous
sports
have a
positive
impact on individuals'
behaviour
.
In conclusion
, I hold the view that the
dangerous
sport
changes
human
behaviour
. To address this issue, the
government
and society should
make
a concerted effort to find solutions.
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