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do you agree or disagree? it is an important part of a child's education to go on field trip or spend their time for learning in the classroom at school. v.147

it is an important part of a child's education to go on field trip or spend their time for learning in the classroom at school. v. 147
The question is whether it is an important part of a child' s education to go on field trip or spend their time for learning in the classroom at school. Everyone with regard to his private viewpoint can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however I am inclined to support the role of field trips in child' s life and their performance. My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my vantage point: To begin with, it is axiomatic that children are too small to sit down long hours in the class and listen to their teacher. The curious soul of this cortex requires entertainment and amusement; hence the educators should look for the most useful approaches to attract children. One should not forget that an active learning can be more effective than passive learning. Take a teacher who speaks about a frog in the classroom. If this teacher provides a trip to zoo, he will cause kids to observe a live frog; consequently they will pay attention toward the lesson. An intelligent teacher can improve the performance of his class with this method. The second reason why I advocate from trip fields lies the fact of obtaining new experiences. A scientific trip provides a spread bed from information for children. For instance, in these types of trips the friendly relationships will be optimized and kids can gain the worthwhile information like how to behave in the museum or exhibition or how to contribute with their educators and so on. Such the experiments can reinforce children' s behavior in next stages of their education. Moreover, in a field trip, the miscellaneous things like taking photo or taking note with painting instead of writing can be taught to children. Such practical skills are undeniable facts which will play a noticeable role in children' s future. As I have illustrated, scientific trips are essential for children to acquire different experiences and also they will be able to learn the most important tips about writing research papers in high school. We could not overlook this fact that field trips will not be tedious in elementary schools unlike sitting in the class.
The question is whether it is an
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part of a
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child&
#039; s education to go on
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or spend their time for learning in the classroom at school. Everyone with regard to his private viewpoint can maintain a specific direction toward this statement;
however
I
am inclined
to support the role of
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field
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trips
in
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child&
#039; s life and their performance. My arguments and reasons
are listed
below which will strengthen my vantage point:

To
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begin
with, it is axiomatic that
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children
are too
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small
to sit down long hours in the
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class
and listen to their
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teacher
. The curious soul of this cortex requires entertainment and amusement;
hence
the educators should look for the most useful approaches to attract
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children
. One should not forget that an active learning can be more effective than passive learning. Take a
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teacher
who speaks about a frog in the classroom. If this
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teacher
provides a
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trip
to zoo, he will cause kids to observe a
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live
frog;
consequently
they will pay attention toward the lesson. An intelligent
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teacher
can
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improve
the performance of his
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class
with this method.

The second reason why I advocate from
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trip
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fields
lies the fact of obtaining new experiences. A scientific
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trip
provides a spread bed from information for
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children
.
For instance
, in these types of
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trips
the friendly relationships will
be optimized
and kids can gain the worthwhile information like how to behave in the museum or exhibition or how to contribute with their educators and
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so
on. Such the experiments can reinforce
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children&
#039; s behavior in
next
stages of their education.

Moreover
, in a
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field
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trip
, the miscellaneous things like taking photo or taking note with painting
instead
of writing can
be taught
to
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children
. Such practical
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skills
are undeniable facts which will play a noticeable role in
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children&
#039; s future.

As I have illustrated, scientific
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trips
are essential for
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children
to acquire
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different
experiences and
also
they will be able to learn the most
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important
tips about writing research papers in high school. We could not overlook this fact that
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field
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trips
will not be tedious in elementary schools unlike sitting in the
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class
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay it is an important part of a child's education to go on field trip or spend their time for learning in the classroom at school. v. 147

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
361 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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