You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. Write at least 150 wordsDouble Line Graph Average House Prices from Target Ba v.1
The graph describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. Double Line Graph Average House Prices from Target Ba v. 1
It is considered that greatest present one could ever give to youngsters is cash. However, some people argued otherwise. This essay will tackle both arguments, but in my opinion, it will always depend on the recipients’ personality and needs.
One reason why some people believe that giving money as a gift would be best for teens is because these younger generations today often know what they like and what would give them happiness. As a result, they are more excited to receive money so that they can be able to buy what they want or use it for what would benefit them. In addition to that, people think that they could buy some things for their gift, but then, it is possible that these teens would not like that. That is why, it is better to give them money and let them buy and use it for something they prefer.
On the other hand, some people argued that when teenagers received money, they might use it for something that would lead them to trouble. In today’s generation, having money to spend with will be favourable to the young people, to be able to meet the trends such as social acceptance and peer pressure, which they try to embrace. Consequently, they could consider spending the money for extensive partying, alcohol, drugs and the like, which undoubtedly have a negative influence on them. Therefore, it is considered that it would be better if people would give them things of value, other than cash, that could rather be useful.
In my opinion, while for some teens, they would prefer to receive cash that they can use for themselves, it is still best first to consider the recipient's personality, whether it would be useful to give them money or some other things as a giftIn my opinion, while for some teens, they would prefer to receive cash that they can use for themselves, it is still best first to consider the recipients’ personality whether it would be useful to give them money or some other things as a gift.
It
is considered
that greatest present one could ever
give
to youngsters is
cash
.
However
,
some
people
argued
otherwise
. This essay will tackle both arguments,
but
in my opinion, it will always depend on the recipients’ personality and needs.
One reason why
some
people
believe that giving
money
as a gift would be best for
teens
is
because
these younger generations
today
often
know what they like and what would
give
them happiness.
As a result
, they are more excited to receive
money
so
that they can be able to
buy
what they want or
use
it for what would benefit them.
In addition
to that,
people
think
that they could
buy
some
things for their gift,
but
then, it is possible that these
teens
would not like that.
That is
why, it is better to
give
them
money
and
let
them
buy
and
use
it for something they prefer.
On the
other
hand,
some
people
argued that when
teenagers
received
money
, they might
use
it for something that would lead them to trouble. In
today
’s generation, having
money
to spend with will be
favourable
to the young
people
, to be able to
meet
the trends such as social acceptance and peer pressure, which they try to embrace.
Consequently
, they could consider spending the
money
for extensive partying, alcohol, drugs and the like, which
undoubtedly
have a
negative
influence on them.
Therefore
, it
is considered
that it would be better if
people
would
give
them things of value,
other
than
cash
, that could
rather
be useful.
In my opinion, while for
some
teens
, they would prefer to receive
cash
that they can
use
for themselves, it is
still best
first
to consider the recipient's personality, whether it would be useful to
give
them
money
or
some
other
things as a
giftIn
my opinion, while for
some
teens
, they would prefer to receive
cash
that they can
use
for themselves, it is
still best
first
to consider the recipients’ personality whether it would be useful to
give
them
money
or
some
other
things as a gift.
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