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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should write at least 150 words. You are visiting your close friend’s city next week. Write a letter asking your friend to be at the airport to receive you. Express your desire to see the famous historica v.62

You are visiting your close friend’s city next week. Write a letter asking your friend to be at the airport to receive you. Express your desire to see the famous historica v. 62
Dear Tom, Finally, I have booked my tickets and arriving London on 23rd June 2018 around noon and I am writing this letter to refresh your memory that you promised me to receive at airport once I land in London. I am going to be in London for a week and plan to see all historical places because my son is very fervent in history and I do not want to miss this opportunity for him. I searched the travel guide which talks about several historical places but I believe that not all are worth seeing. Therefore, I want you to extend your advice about the museums, forts and any relevant places. In addition, my family which includes my wife, daughter and son are interested to see the real play at London fort which I heard very exciting and insightful about past events occurred. It would be a help if you collect the information about timings and schedule. Do not be exasperate, I have kept enough time to spend with you and other friends. I kept all my evenings except Thursday free and we shall visit our university pub, hostels and city center clubs in night. I am very excited about the meet and anticipate joyful trip of London. I am looking forward to hearing from you. With Love, GoG
Dear Tom,

Finally
, I have booked my tickets and arriving London on 23rd June 2018 around
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
noon and
I am writing this letter to refresh your memory that you promised me to receive at airport once I land in London.

I am going to be in London for a week and plan to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
all historical places
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
my son is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
fervent in history and I do not want to miss this opportunity for him. I searched the travel guide which talks about several historical places
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I believe that not all are worth seeing.
Therefore
, I want you to extend your advice about the museums, forts and any relevant places.
In addition
, my family which includes my wife, daughter and son
are interested
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the real play at London fort which I heard
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
exciting and insightful about past
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
occurred. It would be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
if you collect the information about timings and schedule.

Do not be
Consider using a past participle here: "exasperated".
exasperate
, I have
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kept
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to spend with you and other friends. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
all my evenings except Thursday
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
free and
we shall visit our university pub, hostels and city center clubs in night. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
and anticipate joyful trip of London.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
GoG
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay You are visiting your close friend’s city next week. Write a letter asking your friend to be at the airport to receive you. Express your desire to see the famous historica v. 62

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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