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Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include: - What delayed you, - how missing this flight affected you, - what you would like the airport to v.1

Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include: - What delayed you, - how missing this flight affected you, - what you would like the airport to v. 1
Nowadays the majority of tourists prefer to visit harsh condition spots like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. There are both advantages as well as disadvantages of visiting these types of places. First, this essay will discuss how visiting such places boost up the confidence of visitors and secondly discuss why these types of difficult places became deadly for tourists. One of the main benefits of visiting difficult places is that this will certainly increase the confidence of visitors who are visiting these spots. The conditions of such places like the Sahara and the Antarctic is not normal, therefore, someone who survives in these places gets increased confidence. For instance, a recent study of Cambridge University indicates that the majority of people who survive in difficult tourist places having more confidence than their counterparts. Thus, visiting harsh condition tourism spots definitely boost ups their confidence. On the other hand, one of the main demerits of visiting difficult places is that these can become deadly for tourists. There are varieties of species in the Sahara desert such as snakes and dangerous insects that can create trouble for visitors. Moreover, due to the lack of medical facilities as mostly in the Sahara desert, visitors who are attacked by these insects cannot survive easily. For example, one Australian tourist was dead in May 2011 in the Sahara desert as a venom snake attacked him while he was performing a bush waking activity. Therefore, visiting difficult places can appear in these types of problems. To sum up, the tendency of visiting harsh places is increasing instantly, there are both merits and demerits are associated with this. Increase in confidence is the main advantage of visiting difficult places and various dangerous species that are responsible for posing main treats for tourist's life is as a main disadvantage.
Nowadays the majority of
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tourists
prefer to visit harsh condition spots like the
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Sahara
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desert
or the Antarctic. There are both advantages
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as well as
disadvantages of visiting these types of
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places
.
First
, this essay will discuss how visiting such
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places
boost up the
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confidence
of
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visitors
and
secondly
discuss why these types of
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difficult
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places
became deadly for tourists.

One of the
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main
benefits of visiting
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difficult
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places
is that this will
certainly
increase the
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confidence
of
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visitors
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who
are visiting these spots. The conditions of such
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places
like the
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Sahara
and the Antarctic is not normal,
therefore
, someone
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who
survives in these
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places
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gets
increased
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confidence
.
For instance
, a recent study of Cambridge University indicates that the majority of
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people
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who
survive in
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difficult
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tourist
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places
having more
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confidence
than their counterparts.
Thus
, visiting harsh condition tourism spots definitely boost ups their confidence.

On the other hand
, one of the
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main
demerits of visiting
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difficult
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places
is that these can become deadly for
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tourists
. There are varieties of species in the
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Sahara
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desert
such as snakes and
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dangerous
insects that can create trouble for
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visitors
.
Moreover
, due to the lack of medical facilities as
mostly
in the
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Sahara
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desert
,
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visitors
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who
are attacked
by these insects cannot survive
easily
.
For example
, one Australian
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tourist
was dead in May 2011 in the
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Sahara
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desert
as a venom snake attacked him while he was performing a bush waking activity.
Therefore
, visiting
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difficult
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places
can appear in these types of problems.

To sum up, the tendency of visiting harsh
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places
is increasing
instantly
, there are both merits and demerits
are associated
with this. Increase in
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confidence
is the
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main
advantage of visiting
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difficult
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places
and various
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dangerous
species that are responsible for posing
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main
treats for tourist's life is as a
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main
disadvantage.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include: - What delayed you, - how missing this flight affected you, - what you would like the airport to v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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