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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would v.1

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would v. 1
There are people who believe that recycling can be encouraged / promoted by making it a legal requirement. I agree with this view to a certain extent. In my opinion, laws may help but creating adequate facilities for recycling is more important than enacting laws. Many people are aware of the benefits of recycling; yet they prefer to dump their domestic waste on the streets or in landfills. Garbage is piling up in many cities across the world. It is the breeding ground of fleas and mosquitoes that spread diseases. If all families start the practice of recycling at least the wet garbage they produce, our cities and streets will be a whole lot cleaner and healthier. If recycling is made a legal requirement more and more people will definitely adopt that practice. There are certainly some people who will act only if they are bound by the law. There are also many people who do not require any laws. They only need access to recycling facilities. Therefore, in my opinion, before enacting a law, the government must build recycling units in all towns and villages. If people have easy access to recycling facilities, they have no reason to throw waste around. Actually, if we make a thorough analysis of this problem we can see that in many cities where garbage is a big problem, there is a dearth of recycling facilities. The government should also consider offering subsidies to families that want to build biogas plants to recycle their domestic waste. In addition, it can distribute compost bins for free. If there is a law and adequate recycling facilities in place, all people will certainly try to find a better use for their household waste. To conclude, enacting a law that makes recycling a legal requirement will certainly encourage more people to adopt this practice. However, before enforcing it by law, the government
There are
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people
who believe that
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recycling
can
be encouraged
/ promoted by making it a legal requirement. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this view to a certain extent. In my opinion,
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laws
may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
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but
creating adequate facilities for
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recycling
is more
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important
than enacting laws.

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Many
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people
are aware of the benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
;
yet
they prefer to dump their domestic waste on the streets or in landfills. Garbage is piling up in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
cities across the world. It is the breeding ground of fleas and mosquitoes that spread diseases. If all families
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the practice of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
at least the wet garbage they produce, our cities and streets will be a
Consider using "lot".
whole lot
cleaner and healthier.

If
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recycling
is made
a legal requirement more and more
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people
will definitely adopt that practice. There are
certainly
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some
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people
who will act
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only
if they
are bound
by the
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law
. There are
also
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many
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people
who do not require any
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laws
. They
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only
need access to
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recycling
facilities.
Therefore
, in my opinion,
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before
enacting a
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law
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
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must
build
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recycling
units in all towns and villages. If
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people
have easy access to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
facilities, they have no reason to throw waste around. Actually, if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a thorough analysis of this problem we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
cities where garbage is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
problem, there is a dearth of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
facilities.

The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
also
consider offering subsidies to families that want to build biogas plants to recycle their domestic waste.
In addition
, it can distribute compost bins for free. If there is a
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law
and adequate
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recycling
facilities in place, all
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people
will
certainly
try to find a better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for their household waste.

To conclude
, enacting a
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law
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
a legal requirement will
certainly
encourage more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to adopt this practice.
However
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
enforcing it by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
313 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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