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Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it v.1

Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it v. 1
Nowadays, a lot of people believe that learning another dialect would be challenging. Some think that it is difficult because of its many aspects, but others who are motivated to find ways and persevere in educating themselves in such a way that they get accustomed to it. There are two main aspects that individuals view as a threat in learning a new tongue. A particular factor would be reading a different set of alphabet. In my experience, learning how to read the Japanese characters was a bit tough because they do not use the ordinary alphabet system but, instead they make strokes to make different letterings. Another difficulty would be speaking. Going back to my example, learning how to speak Nipongo, the main Japanese vernacular, was twice as hard as reading it. This is because of the different intonations and pronunciations, which, if used wrong, will mean something else to their vernacular. On the bright side, there are ways to ease the pain in learning this despite these difficulties. First is to learn from a native. In my case, I enrolled in a class of a Japanese alphabet teacher and learned the basics of their reading. Second, to address the speaking problem, a person must practice it frequently. In connection to the first one, speaking with a native is one of the best ways to learn and use the language regularly. A good way I was able to apply this was by going to Japan, converse with the local people as I explore the country, which hard at first, but helped me learn how to use it daily. In conclusion, though there are some challenges in acquiring knowledge about foreign language, there are strategies to make it easier and possible. In the end, the success rate of this new learning will depend on the individual’s motivation and hard work.
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learning
another dialect would be challenging.
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think
that it is difficult
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because
of its
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many
aspects,
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but
others who
are motivated
to find
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ways
and persevere in educating themselves in such a
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way
that they
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get
accustomed to it.

There are two main aspects that individuals view as a threat in
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learning
a new tongue. A particular factor would be reading a
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different
set of alphabet. In my experience,
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learning
how to read the Japanese characters was a bit tough
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because
they do not
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use
the ordinary alphabet system
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but
,
instead
they
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make
strokes to
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make
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different
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letterings
. Another difficulty would be speaking. Going back to my example,
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learning
how to speak
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Nipongo
, the main Japanese vernacular, was twice as
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hard
as reading it. This is
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because
of the
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different
intonations and pronunciations, which, if
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used
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wrong
, will mean something else to their vernacular.

On the bright side, there are
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ways
to
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ease
the pain in
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learning
this despite these difficulties.
First
is to learn from a native. In my case, I enrolled in a
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class
of a Japanese alphabet teacher and learned the basics of their reading. Second, to address the speaking problem, a person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
practice it
frequently
. In connection to the
first
one, speaking with a native is one of the best
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ways
to learn and
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use
the language
regularly
. A
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good
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way
I was able to apply this was by going to Japan, converse with the local
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people
as I explore the country, which
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hard
at
first
,
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but
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helped
me learn how to
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use
it daily.

In conclusion
, though there are
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some
challenges in acquiring knowledge about foreign language, there are strategies to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it easier and possible. In the
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end
, the success rate of this new
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learning
will depend on the individual’s motivation and
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hard
work.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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