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You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: •when and where v.1

You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: •when and where v. 1
Time spin and with every spin, there is a drastic change in each and every field. Some people believe that in the upcoming future artificial agility shall have a positive impression on people life's and brain development in every field whilst others think that influence of computer cannot overtake the human's. I shall discuss the both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. To embark upon, there are innumerable reason, firstly, it cannot be denied that AI has been playing a part and a parcel in changing a word. Makes every task effective, efficient, easy and accurate related to any of the terrain such as defence, education, automation, art and craft and so on apart from this AIs are doing different types of calculation and computational tasks at the same time. Further, Aritical agility reduces ambiguous and mistakes in comparing with humanity, and increased degree of precision and accuracy of any tasks, although artificial intelligence can work without any break and complete the task rapidly. Furthermore, computers also use in hospitals for different purposes like testing, CT scans, X ray, MRI and so on. On the other hand, there any negative impact on the society, firstly, AI capabilities of performing multiple tasks simultaneously, it soon replaces human for most common jobs like driving, cooking, customer care, hospital, and consequences in surge unemployment, poverty rate. Moreover, AI versatile to accomplish given duty make human being more lazy and retard which will have a negative impact on their health. In addition, this phenomenon the crime commitment rate will be influenced significantly by these changes. This trend be seen in the individual behaviour when they miss the job and will not have a sense of purpose for the future. In an epilogue, even though progress in the field of artificial intelligence will have positive effects on our lives, I think that this innovation would cause more harm than good.
Time spin and with every spin, there is a drastic
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change
in each and every field.
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Some
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people
believe that in the upcoming future artificial agility shall have a
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positive
impression on
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people
life's and brain development in every field whilst others
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think
that influence of computer cannot overtake the human's. I shall discuss the both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.

To embark upon, there are innumerable reason,
firstly
, it cannot
be denied
that AI has been playing a part and a parcel in changing a word.
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Makes
every
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task
effective, efficient, easy and accurate related to any of the terrain such as
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defence
, education, automation, art and craft and
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so
on apart from this
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AIs
are doing
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different
types of calculation and computational
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tasks
at the same time.
Further
,
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Aritical
agility
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reduces
ambiguous and mistakes in comparing with humanity, and increased degree of precision and accuracy of any
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tasks
, although artificial intelligence can work without any break and complete the
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task
rapidly
.
Furthermore
, computers
also
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use
in hospitals for
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different
purposes like testing, CT scans,
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X ray
, MRI and
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so
on.

On the other hand
, there any
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negative
impact on the society,
firstly
, AI capabilities of performing multiple
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tasks
simultaneously
, it
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soon
replaces human for most common jobs like driving, cooking, customer care, hospital, and consequences in surge unemployment, poverty rate.
Moreover
, AI versatile to accomplish
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given
duty
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
human being more lazy and retard which will have a
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negative
impact on their health.
In addition
, this phenomenon the crime commitment rate will
be influenced
significantly
by these
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changes
. This trend be
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seen
in the individual
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behaviour
when they miss the job and will not have a sense of purpose for the future.

In an epilogue,
even though
progress in the field of artificial intelligence will have
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positive
effects on our
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lives
, I
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think
that this innovation would cause more harm than
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good
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: •when and where v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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