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Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. when and where v.1

Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. when and where v. 1
It is widely suggested that libraries for the public are no more essential in this present era, while other people do not support this view. Although people can now obtain a wide range of information from the internet, I believe that public libraries are still important because they are the only source of some information. On the one hand, there are numerous information available on the internet. Many people now use electronic copies of books and do research mainly using their internet enabled devices such as phones and computers and this trend is on the rise. For instance, in recent years, many undergraduates in Nigeria who are conducting research depend mainly on the internet. Therefore, some people believe that since few people use public libraries now, they are no longer relevant. On the other hand, public libraries house many publications, which are yet to have electronic copies. Many library catalogues comprise textbooks, periodicals, research journals, audio and video cassettes as well as newspapers that have been used before the advent on the internet. Thus, they are the only providers of certain information. For examples, detailed information about the colonial era in Nigeria are provided by the Nigerian National Library. Although, the internet could reveal some of this information, however, they are often inadequate and inaccurate. Hence, public libraries are still important today and agree with this view. In conclusion, the internet is the source of many information today, as a result, some people think that public libraries are not important again. I disagree with the view, owing to the fact that public libraries are the custodian of many information that are not yet on the net. Efforts geared towards harnessing this benefit should be promoted.
It is
widely
suggested that libraries for the
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public
are no more essential in this present era, while other
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people
do not support this view. Although
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people
can
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now
obtain a wide range of
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information
from the internet, I believe that
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public
libraries are
still
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important
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because
they are the
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only
source of
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some
information.

On the one hand, there are numerous
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information
available on the internet.
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people
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now
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use
electronic copies of books and do research
mainly
using their internet enabled devices such as phones and computers and this trend is on the rise.
For instance
, in recent years,
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many
undergraduates in Nigeria who are conducting research depend
mainly
on the internet.
Therefore
,
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some
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people
believe that since few
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people
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use
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public
libraries
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now
, they are no longer relevant.

On the other hand
,
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public
libraries
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house
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many
publications, which are
yet
to have electronic copies.
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library
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catalogues
comprise textbooks, periodicals, research journals, audio and video cassettes
as well
as newspapers that have been
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used
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before
the advent on the internet.
Thus
, they are the
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only
providers of certain
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information
. For examples, detailed
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information
about the colonial era in Nigeria
are provided
by the Nigerian National Library. Although, the internet could reveal
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some
of this
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information
,
however
, they are
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often
inadequate and inaccurate.
Hence
,
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public
libraries are
still
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important
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today
and
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agree
with this view.

In conclusion
, the internet is the source of
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many
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information
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today
,
as a result
,
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some
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people
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think
that
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public
libraries are not
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important
again. I disagree with the view, owing to the fact that
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public
libraries are the custodian of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
that are not
yet
on the net. Efforts geared towards harnessing this benefit should
be promoted
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. when and where v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
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