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You have recently had a bad experience with Skylark Travels on a sight seeing tour package of 15 days Write to the travel company and explain What you were promised to avail as part of this tour What went wrong with the tour What should be done to compens v.1

You have recently had a bad experience with Skylark Travels on a sight seeing tour package of 15 days Write to the travel company and explain What you were promised to avail as part of this tour What went wrong with the tour What should be done to compens v. 1
Now-a-days, the technology has been increasing, and it has become an important part of our life and schooling. This essay agrees with the statement given above that there are both positives and negatives like storing information without any limitation, and people even become lazy. To begin with, the systems can be used to collect a large amount of data, it is used to store important data such as documents, files, pdf, etc. , they have a large memory when compared to any living thing or object in the world and they even show the exact content. For example, I store all my data, including the pictures, videos, important graduation gallery, etc. , in my electronic device rather than using a limited size pen drive. On the other hand, the people become more irresponsible. They are spending hours in front of laptops by playing, watching, unnecessary stuff. The children's study has also been affected by engaging in video games such as Pubg, GTA, Modern Combat and Cricket 2007. To the instance, my cousin has affected his studies by paying more attention on computer games and got suspended from his school by lack of interest in the class. Overall, it is a very positive development, because most of the students take it as positive to enhance their higher studies, rather than cheating. To illustrate, the Canadian University found that the students who used a computer are 50% more likely to get a second class degree than those who did not use. In conclusion, the mechanics have been increasing for past few years, as it became a crucial part of the training, as it tends to keep files but it can make the people inactive.
Now
-a-days, the technology has been increasing, and it has become an
important
part of our life and schooling. This essay
agrees
with the statement
given
above that there are both positives and negatives like storing information without any limitation, and
people
even become lazy.

To
begin
with, the systems can be
used
to collect a large amount of data, it is
used
to store
important
data such as documents, files,
pdf
, etc.
,
they have a large memory when compared to any living thing or object in the
world and
they even
show
the exact content.
For example
, I store all my data, including the pictures, videos,
important
graduation gallery, etc.
,
in my electronic device
rather
than using a limited size pen drive.

On the other hand
, the
people
become more irresponsible. They are spending hours in front of laptops by playing, watching, unnecessary stuff. The children's study has
also
been
affected
by engaging in video games such as
Pubg
, GTA, Modern Combat and Cricket 2007. To the instance, my cousin has
affected
his studies by paying more attention on computer games and
got
suspended from his school by lack of interest in the
class
.

Overall
, it is a
very
positive
development,
because
most of the students take it as
positive
to enhance their higher studies,
rather
than cheating. To illustrate, the Canadian University found that the students who
used
a computer are 50% more likely to
get
a second
class
degree than those who did not
use
.

In conclusion
, the mechanics have been increasing for past few years, as it became a crucial part of the training, as it tends to
keep
files
but
it can
make
the
people
inactive.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay You have recently had a bad experience with Skylark Travels on a sight seeing tour package of 15 days Write to the travel company and explain What you were promised to avail as part of this tour What went wrong with the tour What should be done to compens v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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