Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. It was a good time which I had spent with you the last weekend at your house. It will always remain a memorable time in my life. I’m writing this letter to tell you that when I reached my home I find my coat was missing.
Today morning when I was getting late to catch a train, in the rush, I left my coat. The coat is of black leather which has two side pockets and one pen pocket on the upper left side. I think the coat is still hanging behind the door of your room. There are very crucial things in my coat left pocket that is my identity card, driving license and my office diary.
I’d request you to send my coat to my address. You can either hand over my coat to my friend who is coming to my home next Monday or you can pack that coat in the box and courier me to my residential address.
Looking forward to having a great time with you again.
Yours truly,
Harsimran Singh
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. It was a
good
time which I had spent with you the last weekend at your
house
. It will always remain a memorable time in my life. I’m writing this letter to
tell
you that when I reached my home I find my
coat
was missing.
Today morning
when I was getting late to catch a train, in the rush, I
left
my
coat
. The
coat
is of black leather which has two side pockets and one pen pocket on the upper
left
side. I
think
the
coat
is
still
hanging behind the door of your room. There are
very
crucial things in my
coat
left
pocket
that is
my identity card, driving license and my office diary.
I’d request you to
send
my
coat
to my address. You can either hand over my
coat
to my friend who is coming to my home
next
Monday or you can pack that
coat
in the box and courier me to my residential address.
Looking forward to having a great time with you again.
Yours
truly
,
Harsimran
Singh
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes