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You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, w v.8

You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, w v. 8
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. It was a good time which I had spent with you the last weekend at your house. It will always remain a memorable time in my life. I’m writing this letter to tell you that when I reached my home I find my coat was missing. Today morning when I was getting late to catch a train, in the rush, I left my coat. The coat is of black leather which has two side pockets and one pen pocket on the upper left side. I think the coat is still hanging behind the door of your room. There are very crucial things in my coat left pocket that is my identity card, driving license and my office diary. I’d request you to send my coat to my address. You can either hand over my coat to my friend who is coming to my home next Monday or you can pack that coat in the box and courier me to my residential address. Looking forward to having a great time with you again. Yours truly, Harsimran Singh
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. It was a
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good
time which I had spent with you the last weekend at your
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house
. It will always remain a memorable time in my life. I’m writing this letter to
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tell
you that when I reached my home I find my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
was missing.

This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "this morning" is used.
Today morning
when I was getting late to catch a train, in the rush, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
. The
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coat
is of black leather which has two side pockets and one pen pocket on the upper
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
is
still
hanging behind the door of your room. There are
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very
crucial things in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
pocket
that is
my identity card, driving license and my office diary.

I’d request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
to my address. You can either hand over my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
to my friend who is coming to my home
next
Monday or you can pack that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
in the box and courier me to my residential address.

Looking forward to having a great time with you again.

Yours
truly
,

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Harsimran
Singh
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, w v. 8

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
191 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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