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You have a friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this friend to visit you. In your letter: • invite him/her to a public event in your country• describe the public event• explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she w v.1

You have a friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this friend to visit you. In your letter: • invite him/her to a public event in your country• describe the public event• explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she w v. 1
There are two contrary claims among people that students should survey objects which will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology or medicine, while another group of multitude support hypothesis that each individual should subject their cup of tea subjects. There are various and stunning causes why people trust that universities should only offer subjects will be useful in the future. They are trusted by around environment that universities and other educational institutions second to none choice for improving and developing themselves mentally and of course in career. In detail, medicine and technology, science has created numerable cons to students that finding concordance and beneficial job throughout the modern rocketed era. Likewise science, medicine and technology sector have been developing day by day, correspondingly increasing world population and related to is required many employees. Undoubtedly, the mentioned job sector employees earn more than others. Alternatively, despite these arguments, I drive on this point that university students should not be forced to select their preferred areas of study. In the same way every person is a personality and have mental feelings, especially, have talent and ability in the appropriate direction. I am quite inclined to the opinion that, society will be getting benefit more if the students are genuine about what they are learning. Furthermore, nobody may predict which inclination of education will be the most profitable to society in prospective. Needless to say, society doesn’t consist of only mentioned profiles also artists, singers and the plethora kind of individual profiles, which demanding the special ability and talent also the essential support of mankind and they flourish the world and connect people. In conclusion, in spite of myriad mixture claims I hold the view that people have the right to survey whatever they fond of and unwind themselves.
There are two contrary claims among
people
that
students
should survey objects which will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology or medicine, while another group of multitude support hypothesis that each individual should subject their cup of tea subjects.

There are various and stunning causes why
people
trust that universities should
only
offer subjects will be useful in the future. They
are trusted
by around environment that universities and other educational institutions second to none choice for improving and developing themselves mentally and
of course
in career. In detail, medicine and technology, science has created numerable cons to
students
that finding concordance and beneficial job throughout the modern rocketed era.
Likewise
science, medicine and technology sector have been developing day by day,
correspondingly
increasing world population and related to
is required
many
employees.
Undoubtedly
, the mentioned job sector employees earn more than others.

Alternatively
, despite these arguments, I drive on this point that university
students
should not
be forced
to select their preferred areas of study.
In the same way
every person is a personality and have mental feelings,
especially
, have talent and ability in the appropriate direction. I am quite inclined to the opinion that, society will be getting benefit more if the
students
are genuine about what they are learning.
Furthermore
, nobody may predict which inclination of education will be the most profitable to society in prospective. Needless to say, society doesn’t consist of
only
mentioned profiles
also
artists, singers and the plethora kind of individual profiles, which demanding the special ability and talent
also
the essential support of
mankind and
they flourish the world and connect
people
.

In conclusion
,
in spite of
myriad mixture claims I hold the view that
people
have the right to survey whatever they fond of and unwind themselves.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay You have a friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this friend to visit you. In your letter: • invite him/her to a public event in your country• describe the public event• explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she w v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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