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You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter– Describe your future wife/husband. – What will happen at the wedding? – Why do you want to invite him/her? v.1

You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter– Describe your future wife/husband. – What will happen at the wedding? – Why do you want to invite him/her? v. 1
It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than the local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this opinion. To the favour side of foreign visitors, they are already paying extra amount to the host countries in the form of travel tax. In addition, contributes to the economy of visiting provinces by bearing expenses for their accommodation including food, purchase souvenirs, travel etc. Moreover, local residents raise funds such as subsidies, taxes to maintain the historical buildings and also, state government has been allocating yearly some amount to take care of damages and renovations. I personally believe, those are more than enough to preserve and protect their cultural heritage. So, local inhabitance as well as government should feel proud, happy and responsible to contribute to their own country which in turns encourage more and more tourist towards their land and consequently helps to increase their economy. Another important point to be noted here is that, if tourists aware that they are being charged more comparing to local people then they would opt for other alternative regions. In other words, people neglect this place from their visiting list and they do not even recommend it to their friends and family members. Eventually, this will have a drastic impact on the reputation of the country which also raises the risk of insufficient funds. For instant, In UK important tourist attraction places like Saint Paul's cathedral and Winsor castle are collecting the same amount of entry fee regardless of their nationality. So, showing equality between various country people raises the country’s level of standard worldwide. In conclusion, it is each and every individual responsibility to contribute their money to take care of their own cultural and historical heritage and it’s not fair to place the local’s financial needs on the heads of tourists in the form of tax.
It is
sometimes
argued that
tourists
from overseas should
be charged
more than the
local
residents to visit
important
sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this opinion.

To the
favour
side of foreign visitors, they are already paying extra amount to the host
countries
in the form of travel tax.
In addition
, contributes to the economy of visiting provinces by bearing expenses for their accommodation including food,
purchase
souvenirs, travel etc.
Moreover
,
local
residents raise funds such as subsidies, taxes to maintain the historical buildings and
also
, state
government
has been allocating yearly
some
amount to take care of damages and renovations. I
personally
believe, those are more than
enough
to preserve and protect their cultural heritage.
So
,
local
inhabitance
as well
as
government
should feel proud, happy and responsible to contribute to their
own
country
which in turns encourage more and more
tourist
towards their land and
consequently
helps
to increase their economy.

Another
important
point to
be noted
here is that, if
tourists
aware that they are
being charged
more comparing to
local
people
then they would opt for other alternative regions.
In other words
,
people
neglect this place from their visiting
list and
they do not even recommend it to their friends and family members.

Eventually
, this will have a drastic impact on the reputation of the
country
which
also
raises the
risk
of insufficient funds. For instant, In UK
important
tourist
attraction places like Saint Paul's cathedral and
Winsor
castle are collecting the same amount of entry fee regardless of their nationality.
So
, showing equality between various
country
people
raises
the
country’s
level of standard worldwide.

In conclusion
, it is each and every individual responsibility to contribute their money to take care of their
own
cultural and historical heritage and it’s not
fair
to place the
local’s
financial needs on the heads of
tourists
in the form of tax.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter– Describe your future wife/husband. – What will happen at the wedding? – Why do you want to invite him/her? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
314 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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